Good lord I am hooked this fic has rebooted my love for mass effect I feel like I'm meeting these characters for the first time it's great I hope to read more on the baby because honestly I'm in love

Usually I binge a beautiful story such as this but, and a positive but, I truthfully thought this m zx was a significant case of alternate reality until I noticed that you were just filling in a pre reaper story before game one and I will admit that I was emotionally invested and had to set aside the story from just fear. Which I'm prolly just over thinking but when a story starts of happy especially such as mass effect, usually less me into tears xD So instead of a few hours it took me three days and I really hope this continues soon or someone in the future. It's beautiful and I am heavily curious of the alternate reality outcome of this whole ordeal. I'm a fan of parallel universe theories so stories such as this make it into my top favorites. 3

in the end quite good. unfortunately you dampened the story for me with all this child's business. nevertheless, thank you very much for this nice story.

ah i love Jack;)

I really love your story. All of it. How you present the charakter, how they act, the plot, I just love it. I already read the story 5 times as I reaaaally like it. I hope you'll keep writing on this. Good work c:

Still checking every day for a new update :)

It's just a compelling story 3

when Will this be updated again i love this read so much?

I really can not wait for this to be updated. Awesome read.

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Xengria

I love this story it is fun compelling en very unique when will the next chapter be and will there be a next chapter?

I wonder if with the Reaper tech in her body Shepard could have lived an extended life span if she hadnt died in ME3.

YEA! I love Garrus...dammit every character from the first game was so great...Andromeda sucks man. Its not just the technical shit, all the characters are SOOOOO boring.

I love every part of this story so far except the lemons...they arent bad but there are so many they get tedious when they take up half chapters.

Tali is so fucking cute dammit! She is my favorite character in the entire series.

This reminded me a bit of the Shadowbroker mission. Well done though. But Aria passing out from exhaustion was unusual; luckily, nobody was left to take advantage of it.
The one thing that I didn't quite understand the purpose of was Jack and Garrus' mission, that seemed rather unnecessary.