I love this. I hope you continue to write stories like this.

I liked how you portrayed the characters in character. Especially Laurel calling Thea out on knowing the truth.

Nice piece from Walter's POV.

I love this story. I would love more, or a sequel, maybe talking about what happened after they defeat slade or during. I would just love more!

I really like the perspective you took in this and how Thea hit him with the hard truth of how much he means to her and how she needs him. Also Walter's feelings for them both. Brilliant work.

I absolutely love this chapter. Especially the interaction between Laurel and Thea. This story is so good. Hope you continue it soon

I would have loved to have seen this continued for another chapter or two. Mainly at least to see the aftermath of what you've done with this story. One I've come to like, there truly was some things that should have went differently on the show. Who knows, perhaps one day you'll do a sequel to this. But do look forward to seeing what you do with the Resurrected!Tommy idea you have in mind.

Hey!

I just wanted to drop you a note letting you know I read it and Thea's character is much better now! Moving her suicidal confession to where it is now fits perfectly, too. It hit nice and hard. And I see your reasoning for keeping the POVs in chapter 3 as they were; that's a valid point, and it wasn't too jarring at all.

I LOVE the lyrics you found for chapter 3, and the Mumford and Sons theme. I adore that band. But honestly, I didn't understand why "White Blank Page" was in chapter 2. I always think of that song when I have writer's block, though, so maybe I just have trouble seeing past that.

Anyway, great story! Well done. :-)

Emotional stuff. Hurray for Walter. Severely underused, both here and in canon.

I had a question. Do they know Oliver is the Arrow? Thea and Walter now? Please clarify that. :)

love it

This was a great story :)

Love it!

Good story so far, keep up the good work.

Great chapter! The way you write Walter is really good.