Wow. I never comment but wow.

That was so beautiful. Truly amazing the best I've read in years

Reading the prologue, I was afraid that some weird faking death and/or resurrection would take place. Thank you for not doing that.

There are some things I didn't get, though. Why didn't Anna even consider going to the police after being raped? It would have been really easy to prove. She isn't dependant to Hans like Elsa is and the police would have offered protection. It's not like she had problems with telling everybody what happened.

Similar case with Elsa. Why didn't she get custody for Olaf? She's 21 and even gets it after Anna's death. If she didn't want her father to be prosecuted, why did she tell everyone?

Elsa and Anna seem to rush into a relationship really fast for rape victims. I gladly don't know for sure, but don't they have lots of trust issues?

Anyway, I'm really glad you didn't go for the stereotypical happy ending. I really like those sad endings that leave some hope.

So after reading the prologue I knew this wouldn't end well. But for some reason I told myself to read it anyway. It was a tragic story to put it simple. I shed more than a few tears while reading this. The fact that this was based on real life experiences is what makes it all that much more emotional. To see that Anna loved Elsa no matter the problems in her life was really sweet. And then when Elsa finally had someone to confide in, she was taken from her, especially hours after giving her a token of her love. Such a sad sad story.

"For what it's worth, you never love alone; but you love until the end." That was beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Did you come up with that or read it somewhere? Because I've never heard that particular saying before.

The fact that this is based off real people is hard enough to swallow. The fact that, based off the prologue, there is no happy ending is what makes this harder to bear. No joy in the end, just a brief glimpse of good followed by despair.

Two chapters in and my heart is already torn out of my chest and bleeding out on the floor. That's some kind of record. So now i have to burn through this entire thing, no matter how pain filled it is. Its shaping up to be an emotional roller coaster, and i'm strapped in for the ride. LETS DO ITTTTTTTTTTTTT

This story is one of those stories that make you reflection on life. I really enjoyed it. I actually couldn't put it down when I started to read it. The one sentence that got me sobbing was "she promised to take care of me and if it wasn't for her I wouldn't be with you" that was so sweet so something. Can't put it in words cuz he's 5 and he realizes that because of his sister he wouldn't have survived. "For what it's worth, you never love alone, but until the end" I wonder where you got those quote. All that I'm trying to say is that your story has so much meaning to it and its like if u just told my life. I hope you keep writing stories like these. :)

I'm actually in tears right now. :'( Its just too much. Its very sad but in a good way. This is is wat I mean when I say happy endings aren't always gotta be the happiest. Its kinda ironic actually. This story made me reflection in a lot of stuff tbh. I swear if they make this story into a motion picture it would be awesome. This story was good and I hope you keep writing stories like these.

Dear Author,

I usually don't review unless I really like something, and I really liked this.

So I found this in the morning, but had to stop because I had school, and I was thinking about it all day. I pretty much read on my phone during free time, and now I've been home for a couple hours and now I'm finish with it.

It was a very beautiful tragic story. I ignored the tragedy part on the summery thing and now I pay the price in tears. :'(

The part that really got to me was the fact that they didn't deserve it. And also the fact that you said this was based on true accounts. That's sad but it is what it is.

The ending was perfect and I loved it. You don't need the characters happy for a happy ending. I was happy for Olaf. It broke my heart when Olaf was able to lead a happy life and didn't get bitter. Broke it in a good way :')

Almost everyone there was a total ass and I grew to hate them. Especially Anna's mom. Who the fuck does that!

"For what it's worth, you never love alone; but you love until the end."
That was a tear jerker for me. I can't even begin to explain how great that was.

Anyway, I'm trying to say I really liked this and I needed you to know that. (even though you probably get that a lot)

Sincerely,
M.H.

Well damn! I was kinda hoping for a happier ending, but oh well. :P I still liked this story. Wasn't a long story, but it was still pretty good. :D anyway, really enjoyed it and will look to see what else you have. :D

i like the story but im confused. why do u have elsa and anna have different names like whwen oaken says Arieland aurora instead of anna and elsa?

I swear I've never cried so much for a story in my life. This was an amazing story so thank you so much and keep up the great work!

JORDAN WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME OH MY GOSH I AM CRYING AND YOU DONT TEXTING ME BACK WHY WOULD YOU MAKE THEM DIE?

Tears came to my eyes 'for what its worth, you never love alone; but you love until the end' that line is sooo beautiful amazing storycan not wait for another...also whats going on with mockingbird I also favourited this

Once he said he was Oaken and he's adopting Olaf I lost it and I'm sobbing now