| Reviews for John's Birthday |
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   jack63kids chapter 1 . 3/7/2015 That is perfect—it even has plot! Happy Even Further Belated Birthday, Mr Freeman! |
| Puggle chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 Happy birthday indeed Thank you for sharing |
| Ennui chapter 1 . 9/28/2014 Aw! Lovely. Well done. Enjoyed the jolly rhythm to this piece! |
| LDL chapter 1 . 9/24/2014 Cool! Love it! I had to smirk at this and that and in the end I was just grinning all the time. Sounds like a perfect night in 221B. :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2014 Nice work, JAL. Fav bit? The Molly verse, of course! |
| someone chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 super cute. |
| BenAddiction chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 An excellent poem, JAL! You got the timing absolutely spot-on. :-) Brilliant! I'm sure MF would forgive the lateness of his birthday fic. LOL! |
| Book girl fan chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 Sounds like he had a good birthday. |
| PotterVengerLock chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 Kawaii! (Cute!) Nice rhymes and story telling. I'd like too see more of this talent, but sadly it is rare. |
| Hummingbird1759 chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 I love it when John and Sherlock are domestic. Good job! |
| Arty Diane chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 That was such a cute poem! I liked John and Sherlock's banter. It was funny how John threatened Sherlock, but when Greg did it, John sort of jumped to Sherlock's defense. |
| LightontheSeaofSorrow chapter 1 . 9/18/2014 Always love a good poem and this one made me laugh. You captured the moods and reactions of the various friends pretty well in such short space. Also, had somehow missed the fact that Martin's birthday is right next to mine, so that was a fun reminder, too. Cheers! :) |
| detectivejigsaw chapter 1 . 9/18/2014 Aww...this is adorable! Let me know if you want more critiquing than that, that's just my knee-jerk reaction. |
| mattsloved1 chapter 1 . 9/18/2014 Oh this is great, JAL. Put a welcome, wide smile on my face. Thank you! :-) |
| EJBRUSH1952 chapter 1 . 9/18/2014 "Well done!" |
