Reviews for The Unknown Visitor from Another Galaxy |
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Keith V chapter 28 . 6/25 Way to go with the story there. And the change on this timeline is better then the last one which is f&$# up. Plus I thought Wayle theme would be I Am... All of Me Song by Crush 40. Cause it fit like a b #$ (also can't swear cause I'm using one of my friends phone. They'll find out). Plus I can't stop imagine Wayle voice is like shadow the hedgehog. Cause why not, make it look more like a boss. And the pairing with Wayle and Blake, cool. Tho I don't know, if people want to see a bit of lemon with them. But it's my Guess, don't even know. |
Anonymous chapter 7 . 4/20 Honestly, I just wonder why the Sith, even if not a full one, actually gives a damn about any of this. I was expecting him to try to kill Ozpin and Glynda, not just agree to whatever. I don't think I like this one, sorry. |
Jose19 chapter 84 . 4/14 I don’t know if the OC pairing will work if you are mentioning that he is a Sith apprentice because Blake is in the Light side, and Sith are notorious as murderers, and betrayers. Blake despises people that betray others, and as comparison the girl is like a Jedi to him. |
Azrae1 chapter 84 . 4/14 Enjoyed the chapter but feels like its shorter than your normal length |
Kragh50 chapter 84 . 4/14 Thanks for the chapter |
joeyginise chapter 84 . 4/14 Welcome back. And this is leading to some interesting things. But, I take it that what you learned about Volumes 6 and 7 were only the signs of trash writing and incompetency. Most non RWBY fanatics would probably agree with that statement. A shame really, for such a great show to decline into obscurity. Anyway, onto the Haven arc where Cinder will die and STAY dead. |
Jctherebel chapter 84 . 4/14 Good chapter |
BrutusPrimus chapter 84 . 4/14 Nice work, on this. Understandable, not wanting to watch 6-7. I watched both and I still wonder what the plot pacing/planning was was the directors. |
Jctherebel chapter 83 . 4/14 A great story, I really hope it isn’t dead |
jetjedi chapter 9 . 3/25 Yesss |
sovietgod03 chapter 3 . 3/14 This dude isn't very sith like. Wouldn't a normal sith just... kill them and forget about the consequences? |
Rc Jackson chapter 83 . 2/4 i loved this story... please tell me its still going on.. :) |
Darth Eradicus chapter 4 . 1/28 I'm pretty sure Sith Training would encourage feelings like that, considering how they draw power from their passion, and lust is a passion |
Rp13579 chapter 1 . 1/7 It's a really good start |
danlocke7 chapter 82 . 1/3 Calling it now Phantasm is Emerald |