THIS WAS SO CUTE AND SEXY

Omg that got so cute at the end. Not gonna lie, I've got a bit of a size kink, so I love nagisa x makoto :D

That was just so flipping hot. I want Makoto really badly. So badly. My wettest dream equals something like this story.

Very cute! A sequel of some sort would be deeply appreciated :) I also really enjoyed your writing style in general, though some helpful criticism would be for you to check out your sentence stuctures and such because you are missing a few commas in places and just little things like that.

ohohoho This is just too good. It always is. Guilty pleasure.

You are amazing. Excessive fangirl nosebleed. This was wickedly hot. You stayed in character and had a perfect situation. This was awesome.

I believe you've mastered the art of uh, making me desperately hot. If you could see my face right now, it has a wicked grin on it! I can't believe you actually wrote this. It's literally EXACTLY what I imagined the moment I mentioned the idea to you. You know every little detail and you certainly have picked up on the hottest ones that just get me. I don't even know what to say right now. The situation was perfect and even the relationship between them. It was totally in character too. But, that was one hot and dirty little moment! WOO! I am almost embarrassed to say what your stories do to me when I read them, but I think you know ;) Just, this one was like reading totally the best kind of sexual fantasy. It was just fucking perfect ok! XD Thank goodness I waited to read this until I was alone. Do you know how tempted I was to read it earlier!? That would have been problematic if I did! Mako and Nagisa are so flipping sexy, and no one has ever accomplished making them have this sexy a scene except for you now! *I'm going to read it again right now*

That was sexy :3