This is a very interesting story and I would honestly love to read more of. You have really captured my attention with this and I seriously hope that you decided to update it again soon, because I can't wait to see just what you have planned to happen next.

Do you have any ideas for what pairings you want?

Oh great fanfic!

I do hope you update soon this fanfic is absolutely entertaining! I love it even if its only 2 chapters in. A pairing suggestion if I may. I personally love a Norman x Ash (weird right XD) Steven x Ash and Brawly x Ash. Only those since I'm guessing this story will be centered in Hoenn.

And I love the communication between Ash and his pokemon. Will Ash run into May since he'll be doing contests as well? Can't wait and update soon.

PS. The name above is my actual account. Just don't feel like logging in. Pm me in you need help or to talk.

Heh. This version of Ash is awesome. Go Tom! XD
I love Pokemon fanfics like this.

Nice story! Keep writing!

Bitch please, only sore losers call the peson they lost to a cheater without a single shred of solid evidence to support this claim, so don't portray Ash as a sore loser b/c if Ash is anything, a crybaby who blames others for his defeat is what Ash isn't.

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I like how this story is starting. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

I do have a question though. The summary says it's a slash. With whom is the slash with? I know one is Ash, but who is the other? Is it Pikachu?