OK I could tell from the title this was a Ziva/SR but by the time I got to the end I was confused...I just don't understand what was going on at the end ..Any explanations ?

Excellent!

How diabolical you are! I love it!

interesting story, I think because tony is ziva boss if they get married he can no longer work with her, I never saw this one coming.

ps there area lot of tony hate when his dad is come to vist, I wound find it interesting were tim yell at tony for that, since his own dad did talk to him for years and is now dieing of cancer.

HAHAHAHA, where do you get these ideas? Love it!1

Ouch...
LOL Well done!

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Oh good heavens. I giggled my way through this one, then flat-out guffawed at the last paragraph. Well done!

Looking forward to your next story!

Dang! I definitely didn't see any of that coming. Lol times 100!

That was wierd...funny wierd. You have to come up with another chapter - the last one would be McGee waking up.

Very weird one-you feeling okay?

OMG! How do you even think this stuff up? Pure genius! I wish I could spend a day living in your head - it has to be one of the most fun places in the universe! :-)

no two people deserve each other more than Ziva and Senior.

and evil plotting Tim! now that i think about it, he always has been ambitious. since he could never get that far in his career on merrit alone he had to facilitate the breakup of the team.

mayhap the scene in "Dead Air" has a much darker hidden meaning than we all knew?

OMG! Evil Tim! ROFLOL! Priceless!

Tony in a monastery I love it. If my father married someone like Ziva I would run too.