Alright...first off...you are an amazing writer, and you did what I believe is one of the most important jobs as a writer. You controlled how I felt with the written word. I haven’t read a story that’s made me cry for three paragraphs, make me sooo happy, and then suddenly make me cry again.

I love you, and hate you, but your skill is impeccable, you sent me on a big roller coaster love. Thank you! I’ll be rereading this one a lot.

Holy smokes that was a wild, horrible, gut-wrenching, tear jerking, BEAUTIFUL ride. I have no idea why I put myself through your amazing writing, but I will do it again and again. You had me from your first word until your last, with fantastic worldbuilding, storytelling and emotive writing.

Thank you for writing this, and THANK YOU for not making this a Tragedy. I would have died.

I know that you wrote this awhile ago, but I wanted to comment that I started this fic this morning and it's 9PM now and my heart is broken. I really hope there's a happily ever after, because everything is breaking down and it's making me so sad.

I absolutely love this fic, and your worldbuilding, and your characterizations. It's so dark, and horrible, and I just... love it so much.

Thank you for sharing.

They lived! And there's more? You've blessed us. I'm so glad I decided to give this story a chance.

I swear this story is just a rollercoaster of emotions at this point. Prowl I stg if you did I'mma cry

He's back!~ I love how he just immediately takes control.

"I will help Optimus select someone better."
Sure. That's what you say now...

When Wheeljack got that ping at his door I immediately thought "Well why didn't you get Red Alert to warn you?"

Yeah. That hurt.

oh

Oh god what is happening on this ship

They already had a replacement? Damn. And those files are hella suspect. Something ain't right there.

Well there go the answers to the questions I had! Nice. Prowl drowned/froze himself as punishment. Not so nice. Forcibly retiring Prowl? Primus help this ship.

Wait no you both can't-your Juliet is not dead Romeo! Hold your horses! And fuck the crew for treating Prowl like this. Like damn y'all act like he's not a living bot just like you. Yes, let the couple hundred of us blame this one guy for allegedly killing his closest friend and the bot he considered his child. That totally won't have terrible consequences. Jazz's Guardian Angel Prowl is leading him to safety thank god. I hope he gives the crew hell for treating Prowl like shit.

Oh! And is there another story or something that explains the entities Prowl and Jazz believe in? It threw me for a loop for a sec. Felt like I missed something. I understand what's going on now, but is there any backstory behind that?

Oh my god who fucked him over? It couldn't have been Prowl. He's not that stupid. Who did it?

I love how we've gone from "We just sleep together" to "Okay yeah we fuck" like rules be damned y'all better start changing shit