Nice story. I saw on an old forum that you were looking for more reviews.

so the big battle will finally begin.
but excepted if you had ash catch (yes permanent catch no temporary one) a godlike fused sinnoh trio dragon or mega arceus, there is no consistent way for ash and his current known team to win by himself in usual 1trainer VS 1trainer battle (if most of ash strongest pokemon were beaten by red, no way they can stand against vahirom, and really hope there won't be another trainer help or ash gangbang vahirom in 4 or 6vs1, would like ash with his new godlike powered-up fused fanon mega legendery vs N and vahirom epic battle).

interesting chapter.
never expected that end, and how the hell misty has primal groudon?
with vahirom on 'N' side, i really hope you planned a fuck'in powerful major fanon upgraded legendary join ash during the league (mega rayquaza at worst, the fusion of sinnoh dragon, or even a upgraded mega arceus).

good chapter.
but surprised to see alain kicked that fast.
Also hope you plan ash being directly involved with UB.

good chapter

wow! iris team is abused OP and drayden is a fuck'in bastard as usual.
hope ash will obtain some of her legendaries dragon pokemon at the end of battle, he really need a major one since all legendaries he had left him.

so look someone manipulated N.
but that not change i want ash take back vahirom or obtain another godlike major legendary dragon as powerful as vahirom or even stronger soon in next chapters.

good chapter but poor ash.
basically ash lost all his legendaries beside maybe one. why you did it?
hope vahirom will soon notice his error, escape from N and join ash PERMANENTLY.
or you plan give ash a more powerful legendary: like give him the badass fusion of dialga, palkia and giratina.

really good gym battle

good chapter, interesting that view rom pokemon side.

I've read the first two chapters after the prologue and think they're both good and really easy to read. I like how it's set in Unova as I think it is a region very underappreciated.

I thought this was a really nice opening. Short and sweet. I like how Ash is a little bit older and seems a little wiser, but he still has his character traits.

Yeah, this is a great story from what I've read so far, but I don't think Misty fits a calm and important role, I mean, in the anime She is really hot tempered. And it doesn't really suit her personality. I know it's too late to change and that you may have changed some characters personality, but I think an OC would have fit the role better.

good chapter.
can't wait ash battle

good chapter