xD

Brilliant commentary on the nature of "strong female characters".

Lol. This was fun to read. It was a very cute story. I enjoyed it. Poor Jaune. It'd be funny to see Nora explain why she traded Jaune for a button to their team and Ruby. Maybe even have Pyrrah come chasing after Cinder in a fury. I'd like to see more one-shots like this. XD
-Spirit

Okay this idea was great. Though this could have multiple chapters were each one is with different couple situations where she kidnaps him each and every time and he uses a different method to escape and getaway each time.

Meh, not bad. Could have been written better, but I'm no expert in writing so take what I say with a grain of salt. Overall entertaining fic with a ship so wrong it feels right.

this needs to have more I think its hilarious and would be funny as shit if they got married

That was super funny

XD Hahahahaha Damn this is hilarious XD

Oh great and noble author
I a mere humble college student would like to make a request of his grace. A request that a noble such as yourself must get alot. I humbly ask that you add a few more chapters to the kidnapped story. I will say that it is one of the greatest stories i have come across on here. I will also say that this story is indeed prefect in and of its self and that it needs no additional chapters but i feel that it could blossom into something greater. However the finally say is yours and yours alone and i this humble student will live with it either way.
Sincerely a humbled college student

Haha! The dunceof beacon just tricked the bane of beacon, priceless!

well damn,jaune escaped using flattery and facts.

You should've made them kiss.

That was a pretty funny story

Haha loved the story u should write more of these short story with cinder and jaune

"Give me a button ang jaunes all yours."
I loved that line will you continue this?