battling, catching, and training girls?
that took a dark turn
you got something to say ash...
because whatever it is, it sounds kinky

This was very good, well written. No complaints from me

this serena is so salty man, wtf did u do to her? It's like Ash or no life, shes ooc as hell.

wtf am I reading dude, this story has absolute jack shit flow, it feels like I'm reading a manual on Love 101. This doesn't feel like a story.

It still wouldve been better if brock kept on hitting on nurse joy I mean,It could be used as a tool to release tension when ever there is some.

I'm very impressed that you incorporated elements of the underlying society and economics into the chapter. Yes, it's a kids show, but that certainly doesn't mean that we need to gloss over the intricacies of life in the Pokemon world. I wish other fics would follow your example.

By far one of the best Amourship out there. I kinda like Brock is in there giving advice.
Looking forward for more future contents, especially Amourship (If you dont mind, Clemont x Korrina)

Hey there...!
U know I am a biggest fan of pokemon and also I just love amourshipping. And the way you show your creative ideas and feelings and show the old and new friends blend it just make the story more amazing and superb. U know I'm an Indian and also a gujarati and I waana tell you a thing in gujarati.
Varta vanchi ne maja aavi gai...!... Means... It was fun to read your great story...!
I'm glad to have an opportunity to read it and all the thanks to you for doing such a superb fanfic. And
LOL - Lots of luck for your another fanfics...
Keep up doing great work...

Ketchup...

I like Miette in this story because you made her waaaayy nicer in this chapter. Thank you-for I am a Miette hater and you made me like her in this story. Great story too.

I wish SERENA would sing love the way u lie mash you the video

yay I'm Christian

There was a banned episode where ash and may kissed so yeah it is canon I guess...
I don't know ok? ok I believe that amourshipping is gonna be canon so ash x serena forever yay
From:Utra

I have to say that was a brilliant display of mixing old and new aspects of the series, as well as an overall different approach to Amourshipping. The best word I'd use to describe it would be 'smart'. You used so much realism in the right areas, presented a mature atmosphere in regards to character, regardless of occasional OOC, and it was genuinely satisfactory when reaching the end. Kudos to your skill.

You are an amazing writer. I loved every second of that story. I would love to see a full sequel :-)