I so understood that reference

Ok this one made me considerably happier so I guess I can forgive you for making me cry buckets I also love how Dick had given up the suicide and Wally saved him compared to the last chapter where Wally wasn't in time to save him

What is this do you like to see me suffering here I was just willy nilly picking a random story to read and I get this heart wrenching thing its good and there better be a good ending in the second chapter cause if its a double suicide I'm reading I'm going to bust into a lake full of tears but in all honesty I love how this story was written it was fast paced and got my heart racing with adrenaline

Both made me cry. My fave though was, "Idiot. Goddamn idiot. Fuck you, you bastard, why the fuck were you even-God, I hate you so much right now."

too lazy to log in but couldnt not review. you write amazinggg. And im actually not sure which was better, the tragic or the happy ending. I loved this. can totally see it happening. Kudos!

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This was still really depressing
I had to read this five times over I liked it so much!

Though I did like the sad ending (in a weird twisted kind of way) I really liked this ending

:DDD Yay a happy ending with both Dick and Wally still alive! I like these!

Man, this was even more heartbreaking than the original ending! Why do you have to do this to me?! Amazing, amazing and amazing. The emotions and the feelings...the ending was perfect. Good job!

Somebody was obviously inspired by the season one finale of Sherlock, hmm? lol

I love angsty fics and this is a great sad story but please put up a happy ending alternative! Please!

Why do you do this!? Do you like to see us suffer?

Read it, she says. It's happier than the last one, she says. I hate you. But this one IS really good, though.

Wow that was depressing.

A great piece of writing though.

Tori Chan you better write a happy ending I thought he was going to get caught and what do I read Dick going SPLAT!
Other than that I did enjoy it
Keep on the writes