Wow athat was cool and I can't wait for more from you and I can't wait to read the next chapter of course and I wonder what is going to happen to Dipper now that he Lost his mind I wonder what the Pines family would do now what will Bill do these are things I want to know and learn! well good luck on the next chapter and I can't wait!

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Fuuuuuuccckkkkk you. No. This was NOT OKAY. NOPE. NO SIREE. WHY. Well, there goes my heart.

omg that comic was dark! But this story is a perfect way to continue it! Continue it! Continue it!

OH my gosh, that was GREAT!

This is so well made that...dsfjkld
I have no words.

Great job!

Wow, can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this. I love love love this. And that piece of artwork, even though it was so depressing. Those last two paragraphs were amazingly chilling - I really liked how you used the ropes Dipper was tangled in as a symbol of him being under Bill's control.

If you ever continue I would be so happy. But in no way am I pushing you to do it. Just, gaah, I love this.

Oh my. That last line.

Well, that's not ominous at all. Good job on this! But ennnnnnngh, why'd you leave it off there? If you can, please continue this!

Rope coiled around Dipper's neck? What's that supposed to mean, dude? I'm really confused here, bro.