Hi looks like i like this FF haha.. Is there a chance that u do continue this FF? It woukd be a total waste if u didn't and it's over an year.. So yeah pls
Do something with the continue of this story ."
It's also good that u don't have to much mistakes in words and sentences So
Pls make more chapters thanks ... I guess?

- Miiizukiii

Well I think your over your writers block cause this is good chapter loved it

Omg I freakin loved it had me totally laughing all the way thru it more more more please

You're welcome. :)
Great chapter! Looking forward to your next chapter. :)

Lol! Anna's pick-up lines were so cheesy and cute! And HAH! Take that Hans, you just got burned! Man, please continue this! You're doing great Imoto!

-KAGEJASPER OUT!

This is off to a great start Imoto and Elsa's personality in this story is so endearing and adorable! Keep up the good work! X3

-KAGEJASPER OUT!

Yaaay Hans.. Well at least his 'charms' aren't going to be working on both of them, at least that seems to be the case. Thank you for that :)

It's hilarious Anna trying out pick-up lines on Elsa, and it looks like there would be several encounters like that which I'm looking forward to very much xD Would be interested to see at which of them you'll get Elsa to start thinking 'Maybe we should go on a date' or something along the lines.

As for ideas, I think it's obligatory that Anna finds out where Elsa works and orders a pizza for herself when she's home alone and of course insists to Marshmallow that Elsa is the one who delivers it, and I hope the conversation is a bit longer xD

Thanks for the new chapter, keep up the awesome story and I'll be waiting for more :)

Have a nice day.

Man! That was awesome! I really visualized the last scene in my head. Keep up the good work! XD

I love it! Elsa's being all goofy! It's refreshing! :)

Seems interesting enough. Hope the tragedy tag doesn't include Anna or Elsa dying, 'cause that would be sad, really sad (There will also be a riot just so you know). Though if we're going to love the ending perhaps I have nothing to worry about (unless you're evil incarnate).

No major mistakes except the one line where it was third person instead of first person writing. Also while I know that a topaz can have blue color it's known prominently for it's yellow looks. (: A little too much information about the games and the thoughts about Sebastian. ;)

Also you lied it started with a smile, it started with hip swaying xD

Thanks for the story, keep up the awesome writing and I'll be waiting for more :)

Have a nice day. :]