Reviews for Reunited |
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Guest chapter 2 . 11/5/2017 Ooh. I was hoping for a second chapter of this marvellous reunion. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2017 lovely. Well written. |
lusicaa chapter 1 . 12/12/2014 Oh man, I like this story. It's so simple and I love that you didn't feel the need to include extra details which would have taken away from the feelings. It captures Merlin's sadness and his joy well without taking many words to explain it. And your use of second person is perfect, making it sound like just an observant person without directly involving the reader or creating an OC. Overall just really great |
BornBlindtoBeauty chapter 1 . 11/18/2014 This is so cute. And it helped give me closure after the end of the show (as weird as that sounds lol). I feel like I can go on living now. Just fyi. Also, I love that you included the reader. Normally I don't like these kinds of stories but because it was short and "you" wasn't an invasive character, just a spectator mostly, i enjoyed it. :) Lastly (just for your info), "the man saysd in a deep..." (second to last Paragraph.) Thank you for writing this. X3 |
Dr. Underwood chapter 1 . 9/28/2014 Great beginning! Love the 2nd person narrative, and the present tense! Very good suspense! Can't wait for the next chapter! |