So already on chapter 2 and I do not like this story, Naruto has the rinnegan, six paths, mokuton, hirashin, fox summons, sage training, astral blades, etc. That is fuckin nuts, and the fact that you had Naruto meet team 7 is very unnecessary, also I feel like the ages are a bit weird, probably should've tweaked Nasumi and Naruto's ages.

slight nitpick orochimarus jutsu is impure world reincarnation i believe the only jutsu with birth in it is rinne rebirth

your kinda right in that Naruto training regards it makes me really angry when people give Naruto like the rinnegan and say he masters it in like a year it took nagato basically his whole life to master and control but Naruto has kyuubi helping him it will still take forever just slightly less time

I never really mentioned this, but I have to ask why Kakashi never questioned the fact that Naruto knew that the S-rank mission involved looking for soneone

Jiraiya shakes his head "None at all and that is surprising me. How can a little kid evade my spy network?"

Meanwhile somewhere in the world a red fox eats a toad

That was beautiful.

I was really hoping Haku would be included but ok.

I like all the parts where you can't decide if this is a past or present tense story. Stupid fucking retard. Hope you never write again.

Hey I just thought of something. Unless I missed something while reading the story, what happened to Jiraiya? We haven't seen him since the chapter where he found out about what Minato being removed from Hokage and imprisoned and what Minato did to Naruto. What happened to Jiraiya ans his 'I will find Naruto and train him to fulfill the prophecy' claim? I'd thought he'd be back in Konoha eventually and find out Naruto was back before everything that happened after the chapter we last saw Jiraiya in. *lol*

One of my favorites. Really good ending!

Naruto's old eyes where the dog, it's not really still kekinah or tayuya

as a todas las chicas el harem para restaurar el clan uzumaki, incluyendo a kuchina para sangre pura

I though the girl was Karen, would she appear later on?

The ages are fked and the timeline makes no sense. Basically made them genin for 4 years and pushed events that should have happened already way back

NARUTO IS LITERALLY IN DISGUISE THE WHOLEEEEEEEEEE FUCKING STORYYUU ITS SO ANNOYING. MIGHT AS WELL CHANGE HIS WHOLE APPEARANCE