Poor Tara?

That isn't exactly what I was thinking. I had more of the reverse going on in my mind.

I'll just take a quick guess that Miss Galatea is the canon Champion, right? Or an NPC that I skimmed through because I was busy exploiting the system, hell if I fucking know. What a great way to showcase a Cerebus syndrome in the end, by the way. Showing off how bleak that place really is, seeing how it's literally Succubi paradiso. Might also be an excuse for you to turn the canon chars into other kinks since it ain't CoC otherwise. The Shark Girl and Anemone ambushing aside, anyway. I'll give or take you won't update for another year again, right? That's fine, I still have myself. You seem to have plenty of work cutout anyway.

The only hardcounter to anything in Corruption of Champions that I know of might just be a quick, quick role call of Grey Knights from War40K. Or the guys who hardcounter Slaaneshi shit- seriously, fucked up CoC may be, do remember that Slaanesh is a hundred times worse. Maybe a Khornate Berserker? Mind you, the only reason 40K is the primary consideration I have here is because they have a habit of being unbelievably overpowered to everything else.
Poor guys. Especially since Fenoxo will never get his ass off TiTS, without the final boss available. Ever. So they're basically stuck in Mareth for eternity unless you pull something out of your ass to interpret the final battle. Yep, pretty much.

Tara's been needing a good dicking for awhile~

It wouldn't be CoC if Xander didn't sprout a vag. Maybe he takes a sip of succubus milk, then cures it by chugging ridiculous amounts of Incubus draft or eating a bunch of eggs until his new equipment goes away. Purified or unpurified, who cares, it'll be entertaining either way.

hope they go adventuring soon, lots of fun places in Mareth~

A fun chapter, looking forward to reading about how they will fare with everything else the realm can throw at them.

You having Dawn want to BE someone was absolutely hilarious to me, and insightful. You see, your personality type wants to BE unrealized potential. That's what you strive for, to be unreal. Not to actually do anything, but to be ABLE to do things. You even totally proved in when at the end of Forever After Earth, for no reason whatsoever, in the very last chapter, you *derealized* all off Willow's actions. Everything she'd ever done, you made it not matter that she'd done them because they would have happened anyways. You stayed true to your personality type and had everyone act consistent with your personality type, and yet here you have Dawn saying she wants to "be someone". It's so completely self-delusional, it's absolutely hilarious! It's as absurd as seeing a kid proclaim they want to grow up to become Mickey Mouse. What can you say to that but laugh and laugh and laugh!

This is really weird.

Interesting concept.

Interesting, always nice to see someone else discover the wonders of COC.

a damn shame that you aren't going to continue this one or at least continue this one soon, cause i do enjoy the story so far, and it isn't something many people write about while it is quite interesting, though verry smutty :D but what do you figure with a game like corruption of champions.
I do hope that you still update soon, if you need help with anything for this story do let me know.
cheers

please continue this story once with you done with Ship of the Line: Forever After Earth

pls continue, loved the game and really loving this _

Looking forward to seeing where this will end up going.