Reviews for Death Before Dishonour
Guest chapter 4 . 3/20/2019
A very promising start. Please continue!
CamTheThief chapter 4 . 1/22/2019
Well fuck, that was short but an absolutely blast to read.
I’ve always had a fondness for stories where Harry isn’t the BWL; combine that with him going to Slytherin and having a relationship with Daphne (my favorite fanon girl authors like to write) and goddamn... I loved this. The characterization of Harry and the other Slytherins has a lot of appeal despite the short length.
It’s been almost 4 years since last you updated but I’ll hold onto the small, small hope that you’ll eventually update.
The Whimsical Ermine chapter 4 . 7/4/2018
Cool story
BrettVT chapter 4 . 2/11/2018
This is really well writtten, it’s a shame you never got around to working on it more.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/15/2017
It’s interesting to find a fanfic where Harry is a Slytherin and NOT the chosen one.
777MAR777 chapter 4 . 8/4/2017
Very nice characterisation of slytherin Harry. Hoping for (though not expecting) an update.
Strangelove.MD chapter 1 . 6/12/2017
I doubt you still check your reviews, but I just read this and wanted to tell you that I loved it. It's exceptionally rare to see a fic where Harry is friends with Malfoy that aren't absolutely terrible, and you managed it wonderfully.
George1892 chapter 4 . 10/23/2016
I don't know why I tortured myself by reading this again. Great story. Hope to see chapter 5 someday.
I love this chapter 4 . 9/28/2016
I know it has been a year so I shall not expect it to be finished but you did absolutely fantastic on these four chapter. Especially so, considering you had no beta and are not paid to write so elegantly. I hope your writing career/hobby go well and you have fun exploring where your creativity can lead you.
Dagor16 chapter 4 . 9/9/2016
Very promising story and a new twist on harry is a slytherin. To bad it appears discontineud but I hope that you will one day update it.
young coffee god chapter 4 . 5/31/2016
non shit going on here
sleepinglion5398 chapter 4 . 4/26/2016
Noticed that the author has a good taste in music... Rolling Stones, Iron Maiden, The Script ;) all in all, a good story, I really like it, hope you update soon
G Fawkes chapter 3 . 4/5/2016
Gryffindor and Ravenclaw towers are BOTH accessed on the seventh floors of different parts of the castle. Unless Slytherin is EIGHT FLIGHTS of stairs down into the dungeons, it is NOT the furthest away from the Great Hall. That doesn't even begin to make sense.
Oh, and there weren't "hundreds of boats" coming across the lake, either. Four kids to a boat. If the class is TWICE as big ss Harry's year, they only needed twenty Hagrid's.
Do the math. Then type.
Bookworm chapter 4 . 2/18/2016
Wow, this is a really good story, especially considering you only write because it's therapeutic, the same reason I read actually. I really like your portrayal of Daphne, and Astoria too, but Harry/Daphne is one of all time favorite pairings. I hope you update soon...
ksecc1 chapter 2 . 12/17/2015
Interesting story. Thanks for writing.
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