Reviews for Tease |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2018 Please pick a tense and stay in it. Switching back and forth between past and present tense (especially in a single sentence) is quite jarring. |
Meenathequeen chapter 1 . 5/23/2017 now that was HOT! LOL! |
Chester chapter 1 . 1/27/2015 So much kudos... |
Artamial chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 Hi, I'm kisarafox from Facebook and oh my god...I...I can't even find the words. I think it's because I read about 50 other one shots before this one but this one made me laugh, mainly the whole scenario that lead to Byakuya's punishment (and you described it well enough for me to actually picture the scene in my head). I did enjoy reading this and I might spend the rest of the night rereading this and all your other fics. Thank you for sending me the link! |
lara5170 chapter 1 . 12/16/2014 Nice |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2014 it was great |
Sanz0girl chapter 1 . 11/22/2014 Nice |
Lisanna Scarlet chapter 1 . 11/7/2014 Ano,Kuchiki Byakuya is Rokuman Taicho(6th Captain) not Goduman Taicho(5th Captain). |
MissMeikosan chapter 1 . 10/19/2014 Loved it. The ending was short and sweet 3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 The world of fan fics need more byaichi love! This was a very yummy read! |
Yomi chapter 1 . 10/6/2014 Love it! I reaaalllyy love it! I hope you make another one ByaIchi smuth! XD Can you please make a Mpreg fic? :3 |