Reviews for Birthday Timeout |
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Margaretlucylu chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 this one shot is now the go to favorite story of mine thanks! |
Claudette miller chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 This was sweet,,:) |
StubbornPansy chapter 1 . 1/24/2015 They finally got it RIGHT! |
rangerbabe.1 chapter 1 . 1/4/2015 Fantastic story. Morelli is an ass. Not even getting the timeout before doing the deed and on her birthday no less. Love the dinner between Ranger and Steph. Very much how I could see it happening. |
Steph3 chapter 1 . 12/15/2014 I loved this as well! I can't wait to check out the rest of your work. One (hopefully constructive) note: the interaction between Ranger and Steph leading to the formation of their relationship and declarations of love seems a little hasty and rushed. I could see this coming about in an initial conversation about starting a relationship, I just think it may have been slightly more dragged out. Otherwise, fantastic. |
melanie.campbell.3348 chapter 1 . 12/5/2014 Symphony pastries, I love it. I could so go for a Ranger infused buzz for 40 years! :) Great story! |
Vulcan Rider chapter 1 . 12/2/2014 Beautiful. Perfect. A perfect Stephanie Day with just how I could see Morelli screwing up...and on her birthday, no less. Then Ranger coming back home just in time to help her out, and actually being honest with her, declaring his love and that he wanted her forever. Excellent one-shot. Exceptional writing. Maggie M |
Tiggy318 chapter 1 . 10/31/2014 Terrific! |
JazMitch chapter 1 . 10/27/2014 Hot damn! Gotta love Carlos! This was soo cute and sweet! |
FourReasons chapter 1 . 10/8/2014 Love this story, you grabbed me from the get go and I thoroughly enjoyed every word. |
Stephannie1014 chapter 1 . 10/8/2014 Thank you! Loved it! |
got2BaBabeFan chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 I really enjoyed this one. Great job. |
frostdance chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 Excellent. patsy |
amkp chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 What a great short story! Thanks for it! Angie |
First Generation Scot chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 Nice! Great birthday for Steph. |