I am invested in this story. I like. Very much .. Thou I hope this is a rose / scor fic .

Great writing style, as always. You set up the characters and their descriptions really nicely, and geez louise do I want to punch Bartley in the face and tell him that Rose is not a piece of meat who is asking for harassment because she wore a tankini. So, yeah, good job making Bartley unlikeable, haha. I also wanted to say I love the title for this story-it really caught my eye.

Great story so far! Update again soon!

I love this

I like this - its a good start and the chemistry and tension is definitely there for Bartley and Rose though I'm not sure if this story is about them only or not. I'm hesitant to continue with this story as I'm not quite sure if Scorose is end game. As Scorpius hasn't appeared yet, we havn't had a chance to see their relationship and how stable it is, but there is a good amount of unresolved tension and temptation with Bartley for the current couple to be thrown into the angst and drama. All in all, I would like to see where this goes with a few more chapters :) good start!