| Reviews for Target practice |
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   Jpardo chapter 1 . 6/3 Loved this..wish there was more |
| NikosJohnny chapter 1 . 9/26/2019 I love the story keep on adding to it add more when Natsu plays with his daughter. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2019 This story should keep on going I like all the parts and when he played with his daughter |
| catspats31 chapter 1 . 4/15/2019 While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines: "Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference." Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own. |
| erasenpai946 chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Very good story, this pairing is very cool pity that almost has not, should have more. |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 9/7/2018 Well this was interesting Natsu and Bisca is certainly different but I'm liking it more this story was unusual and 7 years apart damn but glad it worked out and had another kid and got married |
| UchihaAngel98 chapter 1 . 3/12/2018 Great story! I really enjoyed reading it, there aren't many Natsu x Bisca stories. It would be great if you make a NaMi story, Natsu and Mira are perfect for each other! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2017 I'm sorry, but HELL NO! Bisca and Alzack is not only canon, they are freaking MARRIED! Dont' you DARE hurt my ship! |
| Dee-Money chapter 1 . 5/5/2017 Very nice crack pairs seem to be better than main pairs great story I love lil naska real funny wen pulled Gray's hair lol one thing tho lol juvia wasn't in this story ha not that I'm complaining it's good she wasn't she wouldn't fit in this and plus gives gray a break lol I wonder who Lucy paired up with erza probably jellal eh doesn't matter great story |
| ramasioti100 chapter 1 . 9/4/2016 My dear friend, all I can say is that this story is awesome! I love all the ladies of Fairy Tail but Bisca is such a unique character that I just love her. I hope you write some more of this lemons. |
| striker sigma chapter 1 . 7/26/2016 I like it not many natsu x bisca stories |
| Awareness Bringer chapter 1 . 5/26/2016 Great. |
| LoamyCoffee chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 We need more Natsu/Bisca Fics! Or Bisca paired with people other than Alzack |
| BlackDragonShinigami chapter 1 . 7/8/2015 Wow. I... love it. It turned out better then I had hoped. Maybe you can make a story after this. Thankyou gor the read |
| DarkxKnightx44 chapter 1 . 6/29/2015 Dude just saying you should continue this or make a new story with the same pairing with Natsu and Bisca, because the story was fantastic |
