Continue pleaseeee ught can't wait luffy make a hot scene to law ugh!

Please update! P. S. I really want law to end up with Luffy!

I can't believe I read all of this in one go, as in literally in one sitting. My ass kinda hurts now from the lack of movement, but I didn't want to stop reading this. You definitely got that ability to keep your readers interested, which is a great thing! I am also definitely going to watch where this is going, can't wait to read more of this :) Lots of love!

Aaarg you meanie

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs OMFG YES
Ahem...Sorry. As an avid Kid x Luffy x Law fangirl, I can't help myself. Just omfg, please and thank you! I'm loving this story so far!

Oh I like this story. more please, its fantastic

That's so mean to leave it there! You have to update as soon as you can! I reeaally like this story because i hardly ever find good kid and luffy stories so you have to continue this!

this AU is so unique and the narration of the characters is fascinating! i love how you narrate Luffy, i feel like i could reach out and touch him... and all the characters feel so alive, like they're YOURS, not just relying on Oda's development of them- they have a separate life to them and i love that!
anyways, i'm just gonna cut to the chase and beg you- pleaseeeee update soon because this is some fantastic ish!

Sorry but I unconsciously KidLu'd over this chapter though yes I know Kid is being shady and all, and there's Law, and Luffy not much into it but what gives (please ignore my rant) Love this update! Looking forward to the next one. (Apologies, couldnt login at the moment -.-)

Uh oh. Kid wants to have intercourse. God I hate cliffhangers. You gotta update soon.

so A.W.S.O.M.E atm! I'm so curious of what is going to happen next! I hope you update soon ;;

I love this chapter!
You can really see into Luffy and Kid's (akward at times) relationship.
Sad there is no Law though:(

PLEEEEASE CONTINUE :*

I like how little mush their is so far
And it seems pretty realistic too like this could actually happen

jealous Law is the best hehe. Hope he and Luffy make up quick :/