I love movies about Cowboy since when I was a child.
I love this story, it makes me remembered how I loved Cowboy's world.. I remembered wanted to be a sheriff (chuckle)!

Really enjoyed this, thank you for writing it!

That was a satisfying read XD Really haven't seen much western fanfics out there and this was a good story with a good idea to match. It's really refreshing to see a story in an olden day setting which isn't medieval, aaaaaand it was nice to see "revolvers" instead of the "glocks" that i often see in many fanfics (i read alot of modern fanfics) hehe XD And the updates for MSLN archive have slowed down considerably and its reaaaaally nice to be able to read good fanfics

BTW: Are you by chance a Soshi fan? I read a fanfic on AFF by an author with the same pen name XD

Well I'm not too much into wild west stories or stuff in general but this surprised me. And the surprise was on the pleasant side. I've really enjoyed the story.
As for 3rd chapter - I hate to admit that but the rape explanation of Vivio's origin is somehow more acceptable than Nanoha having her with Yuuno.. really. Anyway I don't mind the darker tone of this chapter, it explained everything well enough.
BTW are you one of the people responsible for RWBY future AU?

I agree with the previous reviewer! This feels more of an open-ended ending than the two shot version. But I also feel like it's intentionally left like that... it's really up to us readers now to interpret the continuation from what you gave us, which is a lot! So I'm happy. I enjoyed the banters between the three women, this epilogue really cut it out for both Nanoha and Hayate. Bonus point for ye.

As short as it is, I have to say it was an enjoyable ride to be a part of. Thank you for writing it!

Just a quick review since I'll be leaving in few minutes...

Thank you for clarification especially vivio origin.. But with this chapter I think you sort out left more open ending than the last...

I just wish you could've expanded this story more, since this story has a potential, its not every day we readers meet a fanfic with a different plot, (I'm just tired of reading a plot consist of betraying etc.) but I have feelings that you are very busy human being so I'm content with this..

Duh! Of course YAY! Good story, i like Fate's ooc in here. Though the plot was too fast in the end, but still good since i don't have to follow a official formality law and order crap scene lololol.
Do epilogue!

Yay! Definitely yay! Please!

YAY. ABSOLUTELY YAY.
I know you want to write the epilogue.. c'mon don't resist anymore
hahaha anyway, I like your story... even though it's a little bit rushing at the end. Overall it's good and I really want this story to be longer than this 2 shoot.. oh well hahaha guess you could make it happen with adding an epilogue, yes? hehe

yay yay!

And in the years that passed I've not since read a story that hooked me so severely to the sides. I'm surprised I only found one story stashed in your profile. I'd love to see more of your works if you wouldn't mind.

Epilogue ple-yay-se

yay!... please you got to have the epilouge the story was great, and i need to know what would happen to them and also more nanofate please :)...

Yay please

Please make the epilog story.

I wan Nanofate n EinVivo for epilogue! Please!