...Was the player Prince the black pancho PoH, or a different PoH?

Please continue

You know, i'm curious. How does a banana type?

First: Nice start, with a fairly intriguing concept that's enhanced by good writing and (thus far) excellent and believable characters with motivations I can believe.

Second: I tried to read the rewrite, but as is it... tries to cram too many POV'S in too little space. I like what you were going for, but it needs to be either spread out somehow or have some of it put into a snippet/plot bunny collection.

Lastly: I guess you're a banana?

Yes! THATS HOW ASUNA SHOULD BE! Great job on the chapter and THANK YOU for not being a misogynist and portraying Asuna as a weakling but as the warrior queen she is. I wonder who the mystery figure is..

Please dont pair Kirito with Argo! I absolutely despise her. Pu that aside and it was a pretty good story until now. A few mistakes with tenses were present here and there but you're a fairly good writer! Good going. You have a strong knowledge on SAO but in the start I kind of felt like you'd just taken the whole reference from SAO itself and that if was nothing different. Either way, I'm psyched to see what happens next!

Huh, I just realized how much info could potentially be gleaned from that one line "Because Kayaba told me."

This title of this chapter can't be pure coincidence can it? Referring to chapter 17 that is, idk if reviews are sorted by which chapter they were posted on.

As it stands this is a re-read and I just re-remembered while Prince gives me such a bad feeling. Isn't PoH a member of the Laughing Coffin? That guild means nothing but terrible stuff.

how do you make getting hit in the dick a habit?

Painful but good call. Felt the same in the last 4 chapters so was skim reading just to get to the end.
Will search for your new fic and read it.

Reading, hope it's not all canon

I don't normally review things, but I wanted to say that I've always wondered about this very premise and I love that there's someone who's written a story about it.

Nice Code Geass reference there.

Great chapter and plot