REALLY good so far. hope you update soon. sincerely, taka

Hot damn, this is awesome! Can't wait for more.

A bit much perhaps, but a very decent fic so far. I always have thought that these types of stories tend to be over the top, which is one of the things I enjoy about them. And I will say having a terrified Sakura say "Hai sensei" was thoroughly enjoyable, to the point of it being the highlight of this chapter.

Slighty confused as to why he would look away from what would have been a rocking pair of tits. Good vhapter though and im interested to see where you take it.

Truly hope that he isnt saved from his darkness. So many fics like that and its killing me. Dark Naruto with an awesome story and then a girl gets him to care about love and peace and protecting Konoha. Dont know if thats what youre on about but its what it's looking like.

Good chapter, looking forward to what happens next.

Damn it Kyuubi

Damn, that's... that's... just wow. Seriously good story so far, keep going.

Shit Kyuubis pushing it one turn of the wrist on his stomic and goodbye annoying Fox... and healing factor.
Good chapter thogh i cant help but wonder why naruto became infatuated with Haku
I mean yes FemHaku/Naruto is my autule favriot pairing but...
Is it because he unconsiously feels she had a similer back ground or is it love st first sight? Who knows besides you.
Well great chapter cant wait for more.

Excellent work on this! It was a really good chapter. Once again, saw no mistakes. So you're doing very good on that part. The only thing I wouldn't mind seeing is longer chapters, but that's just a suggestion on my part. No pressure. Lol.

Loved the interaction between Haku and Naruto. Looks like she just may be the Light in his Darkness. Intriguing!

Although...I wonder what'll happen between him and the Kyuubi with all of this? Ooh I want more already! Update again soon!

kinda disgusts me...Kyuubi-sama..BS GF

Great chapter, can't wait to see more

I love this. Its darker than most naruto fanfics but thats what drew me in. I really hope u continue this story.

Niiice! Loved this. Hugely entertaining. Keep this up! I'll be keeping an eye on this.

Good chapter! Wonder what that "feeling" was that Naruto felt towards Haku? Also seems that Kakashi didn't make a good first impression on Naruto either. Ooh boy.

Finally, didn't spy any mistakes. Good work overall!