I'm glad it's finished I was expecting more smut but this is nicely written; how you navigate jade's identity crisis and tori's possible distrust (which she has every right given what Jade did in the past)

Very good opening for chapter 1 the only small thing is I wish that there are more details as it will definitely enhance the janitor's closet sex. Parts like "her hands work magic on me" to me was vague like I couldn't tell was Jade merely rubbing Tori and then Tori was already done and I almost missed it with her internal monologue. And I couldnt tell if Jade had her orgasm yet but from the "her regaining breathing." i guess she did but just not enough descriptions.

chapter 2 was definitely better i loved the analogy to the black hole and the descriptions of their sex is much clearer

Beautiful

I LOVED this! The writing was so cryptic in its descriptions that it reminded me of mystical verse but with a comprehensive story too! 100 out of 10, will definitely read again.

the story was amazing, i read the whole thing in a day and i loved it. thank you

It's great that you finished this. I had stopped checking into the Victorious fandom because I had lost hope of it gaining strength like it used to have, but I decided to look through it again only because I haven't felt like writing for some time. I'm glad I did. For something that took you some time to finish it came out lovely. The ideas and thoughts put into this really hit me and made me think. So thanks for that. Although you're done writing you left memorable contributions, in my opinion.

I really like this story. It was sweet and funny and hot in the right combination. It could've been a good one-shot but I, for one, am glad you expanded on it. I'm also grateful you finished it. A beautiful job.

I can understand you leaving fanfic. I did myself for a while but don't be surprised if some show grabs you by your lapels and drags you back in - like "Victorious" did to me.

Thank you for the time and energy, both physical and emotional, you gave to us. The story was a deep dive into the heart of the girl who wasn't sure she could change. But she learned she didn't change so much as she adapt, survived, found love, and moved on to chase the sun or sit and wait for it to return. The sun always returns, unlike the people in our lives. But i could feel the story circling towards the end the further i read this chapter, and it was a good thing. jade and Tori, happy and together.

So if this was your last foray into fanfiction, then than you for the story. I see the fandome dying, but also know that like any legend it will survive as long as someone believes. Time then for others to carry the torch. Still, thanks for the story.

A somewhat happily ever after eh? I do t think we could expect any less from Jade and Tori.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Amazing story! It's really good, well narrated and fun.

Oh! This is so good. I like the fact that apparently Jade has been liking Tori form a while. It's good that she is the one that let her walls fall for a change.

Cool chapter. Thanks for writing.
Caro

Incredible, I'm hooked. I love this type of Lemmon is sexy and totally relatable. When Jade tgakes her clothes out... Unf! So good.

Thanks for writing.
Caro

I hope it's not but I love what you've written so far - a very sweet but also enlightening story.

Jade got to look at her and Tori through the lens of panic, love, and closeness. But what she realized was the trap was closing around her, and she was faced with the choice of which limb to chew off to escape. Jade chose not to, but Tori saw something else that Jade will need to get through. Identity is the next pert of the equation. Tori wants Jade, all of her, and wants the girl to know she's the same person, just open to more of herself now.

Or maybe I'm reading too much into things.

Things are really confusing indeed, as far as I see it anyways.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.