seems a bit too direct on dialogue "I want you sexually。"

PurpleYumi is such a hater. Making love in a public place is one of the semi-normal things in a fanfic. anyway~ I think the story pretty good

Eww gross , why miku making love in public place it's so gross and she would make kaito ashamed . ( well scratch that miku doesn't even deserve kaito )

Is not detail at all and it's lollicon