Brilliant Story! I have been looking for so long for a story about Jason and Ariadnes children. The ending of the final episode of Atlantis made me so angry, in my opinion the birth of Analise should have been how the series ended.

I've just read this all together, I couldn't put it down, you've got a real knack for writing I think you wrote the characters amazingly and you have created an alternate ending that I needed for Atlantis as it's not continuing, so thank you, I hope you post other stories :D

I knew the song. Love this fan fic

Awww another sad but brilliant chapter! I can't wait for more!

I love this story so much please write a sequel or carry on with this one it is amazing!

Aww, such an adorable family. I feel like I say that in every review, lol, but Jason and Ariadne as parents are too cute.

Nicely done with the story.

I never review on fanfics but this story is something different. I would say it's probably the best fanfic I've ever read, I've read a lot. You are indeed an amazing writer and have captured the characters so perfectly unlike anything I've ever read before on any fanfic, not just Atlantis ones. Truly amazing and great work!

Hi I love it his story I've read it so many times I love please keep writing xxx

Its good to see another update! Looking forward to the next one!
-MarvelMatt

Awwww great chapter! I hope Ariadne is okay. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen your doing a great job!

I think this story is absoloutley excellent and you have a real flair for writing. I love how you have given jason and Ariadne children- I have been looking for a fanfic like this for ages! Please finish the chapters- it has been a while since you last updated but you must of course focus on your exams! Xxxx

I love this story please update

Please update I really want to know what happens next

P·S I Love this story so much

nice job xxxx

I'm loving this, so glad you've kept it going c: There aren't many jariadne fics around so thanks for this, its great! :D Can't wait to see where it goes c:

Great story, great chapter! Loved the cliff hanger! :) can't wait for the next couple of chapters
Good luck with your exams :)