This chapter puts me off.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS

Please!
It continues with the history is very entertaining

Please update!

Daaaaamn, I knew Susan was a badass, but DAMN! Killing Miraz in cold blood, way to go ;)
But now Caspian's in trouble, I hope he can help things turn around.

Thanks a lot for updating!

Happy to see an update. I liked how Susan fooled them and took out Miraz. We'll see what happens next. Good story.

Noooope. This is not happening, Susan is perfectly fine.
(please don't hurt Susan, I'll cry)
Thanks for updating!

You cant just leave it liek that!

UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY SOON :)

Happy to see an update. Can't wait to see what happens next.

The last two chapters were very good! This is full of suspense and action so please keep the updates coming! I wonder what Edmund's reaction to this new development will be...and will Caspian really leave Cornelius and come? Or maybe we can look forward to another getaway?

Yay an update! I really like this story. And I'm glad she's not leaving him behind.

Yes yes yes! I thought you were going ti be cruel with another cliffhanger but this was perfect

That was really good! I hope u update soon!:D

Even if he made the decision to hand over Susan and Edmund to Miraz, like, how's he gonna do that? Susan and Edmund can just jump out the window and leave the other two if they're being betrayed.
Anyways, thanks for updating, I liked it!