Ohmigooosh! You. Did. Not. Just. Do. That!

' This Means War... "Oh yeah! I found a pretty flower!" '
Me: ...AHAHAHAHAHHAA

Pineapple. Pineapple. Next thing I know, it'll be a durian.

oooh! Likes Loren already.

Hey! Nice story you wrote. I was actually thinking about writing something like that.. but I dont get the right ideas..T_T
...Anyway I think you should write something new! I am really obsessed about Ascension and I ship Koda (Kole Aida) forevaaaaaaah...
:D
btw, green is my favorite color :D

the story is so gripping.

KYAAAA! TILLIE! XD

Minecraft sequel, huh? Interesting, I'll go check it out. But on with the review, eh?
First off, congrats for seeing this one through to the very (and very satisfying, may I add,) end! And as for being too cheesy? Nah. There's an art to doing cheese, and you managed to balance it quite well with fourth wall mayhem, which I quite liked. And OH DELAYED FANGIRL REACTION LOREN AND KOLE WERE BUDDIES BUT WAit a second, shouldn't Kole have heard, way back when Jace was being a drunken ass and trying to rape Ann, and wouldn't Kole have done something? Maybe he sent Loren in, but failed to properly explain the situation until it was too late for Ann... Meh, minor complaint. Still, though, I had fun reading this, good job!

Slightly weird, when r u doing the sequel, the story was epically, fantastically, awesomely amazing! Cant wait for sequel!
Ellie

Hey, absolutely amazing, ur a brilliant writer! (Its Ellie by the way!)
C u

Ooops...

I KNEW IT! I KNEW SVENYA WAS LOREN'S SISTER!

THE SIGNS ARE OBVIOUS!

Yay! I am glad I had some useful ideas for once!

YESH ANN IS ALIVE! LORANN IS BACK PEOPLES!

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(btw, was that a fourth wall break towards the end of the chapter? I have no idea how to react anymore. Butterflies? Rainbows? COTTON CANDY GOSHDANGGIT MAKE ME HAPPy COTTON CANDY MY SOUL IS TORN IN TWO!

ONE SIDE IS HAPPY!

THE OTHER SIDE IS BAWLING...

I AM MOST LIKELY GOING TO CRY SOMETIME TONIGHT)

I have a few ideas...
Maybe Ann could wake up in Herobrine's castle? And she has to work for him as a maid or something? And it turns out Herobrine is really Minecraft's version of Jace?

AND MAYBE SO RANDOM OC COULD BE MINECRAFT'S VERSION OF LOREN? Or maybe Notch could be Loren?

OH OH OH! And maybe there is a religion in Minecraft where they have gods and goddesses of things, like water, birch trees, clouds? And you could be the goddess of the 4th wall, and anyone you want could be the god/goddess of their choosing? I dunno...

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