It seems like there is something more afterward, such as the future about England magic society not involving Potter family, and about Harry P you for your fascinating story, I've really enjoyed it!

Oh my gosh— I am loving this. I think it is stunning

I know that being a male bearer is something really special, but seriously, are there no girls in this world? Are the girls being told that they'd look really special that way too?

I know the emphasis of this story, and I am enjoying it, but I just wanted to ask some questions about it.

Still, Severus has been very good for his grandfather, as well as vice versa. Christophe is a brat and deserves a severe set down, and I hope he gets one.

I'm still happy he isn't going to Hogwarts, though.

A kitten and a puppy, perfect! Someone to cuddle when his grandfather is busy, and all that. Plus Severus is a pretty responsible kid.

If Minerva knows about the problem of House rivalry, why can't she do anything about it? Oh, wait, Albus...

i only started out at this story, but it's so captivating that i have a hard time putting it aside to make our sandwiches for tomorrow. i love the way have written this. thank you

Had to reread, still a fave! Love a good what-if story.

Awe, very lovely story!

They really are good together and I'm glad that Harry gets to have siblings

this is certainly a unique writing style. I enjoyed it a lot. that you for sharing

Just finished rereading this amazing story. You along with one other author have made me a Severus/James Fan. In your proposed one-shots I hope there will be a Severus/Lucius pairing along with more Severus/James and Severus/Sirius.

your sexual parts seems more like hard porn not loving acts at all. this is not only lucius parts but even severus comments. mostly you write severus parts like he is a male whore. i was assuming when james arrives you will clean it up a bit but it seems he is as filthy as lucius or avery or christofe.

severus seems to sleep with everyone he encounters. have you ever met a grandfather who would tell a 15 year old that he had sex in the streets unless he is a pervert?

By the way did severus just drug lucius and rape him some chapters back. then you wrote that lucius tried to rape severus and he did not call for help because he wanted to find out if lucius would really rape him? i believe rape is not something you look forward to and you make this severus happy about it.

i assumed severus only just bears children not become an unpaid prostetute

what is your deal with keeping on repeating the harry potter (original) instead of just writing your story.

You are bloody brilliant!

rotflmao best mention ever to Cinderella xD

I love it very much
And the last sentence is so perfect !
Thanks a lot for all people who can be pregnant!
We are more of that fact
So, thanks again