This was a good story and it was Funny that Laprus thoughts Ash and Richie were twins because they look alike I can see that and when you said that Oliver and Luka looked alike are they Sibling I didn’t know that and nice that they all worked to make Oliver’s parents Present and it was funny how Ash and Luka blushed when their hands touched and in the end it looks like she might like Ash more than Brock and nice that Luka offered to give Ash a lift when he does find a new League and here are some ideas for Future Water type chapters 1, Pokeshipping (Misty) 2, Muchwatershipping (Marina) from Orange islands 3, Nomadshipping (Lizabeth) because of her connection to Manaphy 4, Footpathshipping (Sierra) 5, Badtempershipping (Katie) 6, Slastouiseshipping (Neesha) 7, Discoveredshipping (Wilhelmina) 8, Recoveredshipping (Soledad) 9, Raindbowfeathershipping (Verity) from Movie 20 10, Pokesurfshipping (Cissy) Orange islands gym leader 11, Petrie Who has a Maril 12, Trinity from the whirlpool cup.

This was a good story it was funny how Ash’s hair accidentally got growing very long because of a spilled Hair condoner and nice one of Ash countering Serena’s Argument on him always wearing a hat when she is also do it and I don’t think a hair style will make Ash more confident as a trainer or look stronger your hair has nothing to do with being a Trainer but Ash’s new hair style was good in the end and his cap fit better now and I guess Ash now see what Dawn was talking about how your hair feels after being washed and here are some ideas for future Normal type chapters 1, Givenpokegearshipping (Lisa) 2, Hungryforcontestshing ( Lila) 3, Ubeshipping (Mamie) 4, Thiccshipping ( wicke) because of her connection to Stufful 5, Windfestofusshipping (Risa) from Movie 21 6, Hattheirshipping/Lapshipping (Apom/Ambipom only if you don’t mind human and Pokemon pairing Nene Who has a Farfecht.

This was a good story the ghost type Pokemon appearing to Ash and Angie because they needed to return the summit models to fully close the gate since removing them on a full moon night opened the gate and it was nice to see more interaction between them from all that happen and was nice that Angie wanted Ash to sleep with her because she still felled spooked by what happened and here are some ideas for future Electric type chapters 1, Ourstatueshipping ( Mirror Bonnie) 2, Cinamativeshipping ( Jean) from the Pikachu movie making episode 3, Backviewshipping (Solana) who has a Plusio 4, Pikarla from the Pikachu valley 5, Ellie who has an Amphros 6, Alissa who has Plushio and Munus 7, Mary who has Mereep.

This was a good story Max is supposed to have readed about Pokemon so he should of known that Rapidash fire would burn people it don’t trust and That Dario has the nerve to call Ash and Lara cheater when he was cheating for the race and it was nice that Team rocket took him away guess they didn’t like how he was treating his Pokemon and it was nice that Lara offered for Ash to stay at the ranch after he comples his dream and it was nice that the Ponyta and Rapidash wanted them to be together and here are some ideas for future Fire types chapters 1, Childshipping (Molly Hale) because of her connection to Entia 2, Victoryshipping (Marley) 3, Pearlshipping (Dawn) because she has a Quilava 4, Amourshipping ( Serena) 5, Mirrorqueenshipping (Mirror Serena) 6, Burningtrainer/Talonflameshipping (Malva) 7, Heroemergeshipping (Allegra) 8, Ramona 9, Natasha since she has a Slugma.

This was a good story and it was interesting that Giselle and Cubone seam to loose their edge and so they called Joe to bring Ash to help and nice that Pikachu realised that it was hungry and I’m sure it was Charazard was the Pokemon Ash said that didn’t listen to him he was when Giselle said she was haveing problems with Cubone listening to her and I’m sure Joe was saying that She won’ T admit that she liked Ash especially the way she blushed from Ash’s reaction and it was nice that Giselle said she was sorry for the the way she looked at Ash before making her a bit more nicer and it was funny that she said to him not to tell Misty that she kissed him and it was funny that Misty was warning Brock and pulling his ear so he wouldn’t think of flirting with her sister and Pikachu is wrong about Misty not caring that Giselle kissed Ash and here are some ideas for future Ground type chapters 1, Electricteleaportionshipping (Mira) 2, Gliscorshipping (Bertha) 3, Hapu the last kahuna 4, Pietra 5, Rita (Johto) and Sue 6, Assunta 7, Julie 8, Leona Dawn’s childhood friend who has a Swinup.

This was a good story nice that Dawn invited Zoey to help Ash train for the junior cup and the Unova League and it was interesting that Zoey sneaked behind Ash to pull him underwater and kiss him and it reminds me of your Bianca fanfic were she wakes Ash and pulls him underwater for a midnight swim and it was interesting that she did it because she wanted to Apologise for not doing much for when he was criticised and if Zoey met Trip I want her to give him a peace of her mind and nice one with her telling Ash he’s need someone to love him as well as Pokemon and Friends and nice that the Pokemon can tell Zoey likes Ash and I liked Dawn’s argument with Iris because I fought they got on to well and I really wants to know why she travels with Ash in the first place and I think it’s interesting that Zoey thinks Ash can do better with a girl and here are some ideas for future Ghost type chapters finally 1, Hapu since she has a Golerk 2, Rhyanna who has a Mistrequse 3, GentleGardenialovershipping (Layla movie) since she has a connection to Giratina too.

This was a good story nice that Ash and the gang met the Kalos trio for some Fire works and it was interesting to see Princess Allie in this and nice reference to gym badges that Ash has one and it was funny that Shauna was holding Ash’s hands without knowing it and when they realised it they both blush and nice that Shauna was talking to Ash about Love and it was nice that Allie’s lie about the Myth of Love fireworks was what lead to Shauna kissing Ash and nice that Shauna said to Ash that Serena will likely want to be a Pokemon proformer and it was funny when the idea of he doing Preforming was brought up and here are some ideas for future Grass type chapters 1, AdvanceShipping (May) 2, Amshipping ( Mairin) 3, GentleGardenialovershipping (Layla) who has a connection with Shawmin 4, Grinshipping (Sonrisa) 5, Pavilionshipping (Diana) because she had a connection with Celabi 6, Natasha 7, Mariah 8, Elma a Pokemon Proformer 9, Rita (Hoenn) 10, Natalie 11, Nicole 12, Bailey.

This was a good story but you were missing one competitor from the league Virgil but still good and nice Reference to previous leagues and Iris’s reactions to the Kiss proves she doesn’t like Ash and it was nice that Cilan accepted he was enough of a Connoisseur and it was interesting that Roxie kissed Ash in front of the whole crowd but if her Kiss was poisonous Ash would probably be Dead and nice one with Cilan putting Iris in her place and here are some ideas for future chapters 1, Unlucky/Pike shipping (Lucy) 2, Muchwatershipping (Marina Orange Island) who has a Tentacruel 3, Forsythia 4, Mariah 5, Elma a Preformer.

This was a good story why didn’t you show Clair kiss Ash it would of made the story better the blush she had after she fell on Ash and after they all realised the kiss was cute and nice that Clair shown Ash that secret formation and nice she brought Sleeping bags for the night and here are some ideas for future Dragon chapters 1, Altroshipping (Latias) only if you don’t might Human and Pokemon pairing 2, Indulgenceshipping (Brianna) who has a Vibrava 3, Emma 4, Gail both from the Unova region and one of them is from the second Club Tournament.

That way a good story nice that Diantha ask Ash to help her and nice that she got to see his other pokemon since later her Gardavoir will fight Ash's Frokie again when its AshGreninja to almost been Defeated and intersting that Ash fought Diantha was an Angel since she was dressed in all white like one would be and interesting at the end that Diantha might make Ash a Actor someday and that she liked the idea of being his Angel and heres some ideas for future Pyschic type chapters 1, Advancetwinsshipping (Liza) hoenn gym leader 2, Hyekkakushipping (Olympia) 3, Chimetuneshipping (Francrsca) 4, Humbleshipping (Concordia) 5, Tenderheartshipping (Anthea) 6, Herowatchshipping (Kate) 7, Jourdeplusieshipping (Elise) 8, Circusshipping (Stella) 9, Pavilianshipping (Diana) because of her connection to Celebi) 10, Dontbendacendshipping ( maya) 11, Electrictelaportutionshipping (Mira) 12, Erica Hoenn.

This was a good story and its a shame their isnt anyother Halloween chapters you made and it look like Penelope's Syliveon has a crush on Frokie and this is the third chapter were both the girl of the day and her female pokemon show an interst in Ash and one of his Pokemon others beging Liza from Volume 1 and Trixie in Volume 8 and here are some ideas for future Fairy type chapters 1, Amourshipping (Serena) 2, Ourstatueshipping (Mirror Bonnie) 3, Circusshipping (Stella) 4, Pearlshipping (Dawn) 5, Mina Trail captain and Artist 6, Cehla Pokejump sledge champion 7, Brittney who has an Iggypuff.

This was a good story and nice Korrina teached Ash how to skate also nice that you menioned Ash's skateboard with Gary back in Johto and good that Ash saved Korrina from getting hurt only for him to get hurt hinself but nice that she gave him two kisdz for saveing her and intersting that Bonnie was more a natural on Skates for her first trie more than Ash and interesting that Korrina offered him to stay in Kalos so she can teach him more Advanced Tricks and Proberly for them to be together and here are some ideas for future Fighting types 1, Advanceshipping (May) since she has a Blaziken 2, Arenashipping (Greta) 3, Heroemergeshipping (Allegra) 4, Thiccshipping (Wicke) because she has a connection to Stuffel) 5, Grace (Hoenn) 6, Scraggy Preformer from XY series can't remember her name.

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Good stories again

This is a nice story but the name for the Ash x Penelope ship is Fairlyteachshipping and Frokie is a Frog so it not a reptile it has Ambibionskin.