What happened to the formatting? It just became horrid after 2 chapters. It was at least fine for the start, but now the dialogue is scrunched into the paragraphs. It's at least acceptable if it's just a single person speaking in the paragraph, but you're supposed to give the other speakers their own paragraph at least.

I have not given up on this story. I still wait for your next update.

Thanks for not giving up on this story and admitting that Weiss is a threat in her own right. She is not solely a support.

I like how he pisses Glynda off. I hope to see more of that

"i was better off in the void" he sighed, clearly annoyed (Dem Rhymes XD )

i like your writing style. keep it up

Well this is a mighty interesting find if I do say so myself. Interesting how you made the characters and there reactions that I can almost see how they reacted and such. Good work on the story I'll wait for more

Hahaha love the story ! Hope u update soon :)

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

did you get the idea of the void from LOL?
just askin'

This is good so far keep it up