| Reviews for Falling from the sky |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 6/17/2017 Sad to see that you are not continuing to write fanfiction, just wanted to say that I loved your story and thank you for writing it! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/27/2017 OMG! I can't wait for the rest! Please continue, this is great! |
 yuzukikuran476 chapter 5 . 6/2/2016 please update :D |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 6/2/2016 i wonder who's going to win ? :O |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 6/2/2016 hehehe this story is going to be amazing to read :D |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 6/2/2016 please update :) |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 6/2/2016 please keep ace and Marco and Whitebeard and Thatch alive in this story please update :) |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 2 . 3/16/2016 like |
| Fushiso chapter 5 . 9/16/2015 its very good and the grammer may be off but i can still tell what your tryinv to say.. and i hole you continue it ... also in ch 3 i believe ace automatically knowsmarcos name whe did he learn it? He only knows marco as blonde or phoenix |
| lil ol me chapter 1 . 8/27/2015 love it! |
| ventusleone chapter 5 . 4/25/2015 DON'T YOU DARE TRY TO SELL OF MARCO YOU SICK SLAVE-TRADERS! ACE LOOK AT WHAT YOU HAVE DONE! I like it... The story i mean... It's good... You have some spelling-mistakes but for someone who is not a native english speaker you are good ) Thank you for an awesome story 3 |
| azpha chapter 5 . 4/24/2015 cool ! the story speed up ! continue like this ! |
| nighttempes chapter 4 . 4/12/2015 You love cliffhangers don't you? |
| ventusleone chapter 4 . 4/12/2015 This is getting epic _ |
| SpookyCookie chapter 4 . 4/12/2015 Sounds great, I'm so thrilled to see what happens next. I spotted some minor errors like forgetting a word or mistaking singular/plural, you may want to watch out for those. Just PM me if you desire a detailed list. As a french native, I just HAVE to point a particular mistake : at the beginning, you wrote 'viola'. The actual word is 'voilà'. ('Viola' means '(he/she) raped', soooo... Yeah, that's an awkward mistake.) Will Ace win, or get his ass kicked?! How will he convince Marco to join?! What happens next?! So many questiooooons! |
