Reviews for The Beginning of it All |
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natters chapter 1 . 11/8/2019 cute fic |
jessym1988 chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 a great short and cute story |
DaybyDay5 chapter 1 . 6/20/2016 Great writing captured! |
Maddie chapter 1 . 12/21/2014 awh thats adorbs!1 keep writing! |
Jaimee chapter 1 . 12/20/2014 This was perfect! Just the right amount of interaction so that the characters seem real! Well done and I'd love to read more! |
Sibuna4evs chapter 1 . 11/20/2014 You should really write more of these. You're a great writer! Also, if you could make it a multi-chap that would be awesome! Loved it! |
Horses-are-my-life chapter 1 . 11/7/2014 Was that being part with the over due water bill really in the show? Sounds familiar |
LowBrown chapter 1 . 11/1/2014 THIS IS PERFECT 3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2014 Wow this sounds like it could actually be a real plot point. Good job! |
Animefreak 12 chapter 1 . 10/28/2014 Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, I am fangirling so much that was so cute. Thank you |
IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 1 . 10/28/2014 Tee hee. Nice job! |
arinhel.melleide chapter 1 . 10/25/2014 Just absolutely adorable! |
BananaGuts chapter 1 . 10/24/2014 ASGJSDKLGDKJVJGFASDS! THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING EVERRRR! :D :D :D |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2014 cute, though it seemed improbable that a team of geniuses wouldn't know about how to file taxes. other than that i liked your writing and how you had fluff but tied it into the plot. good work! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2014 For your first it was great! |