Reviews for The Beginning of it All
natters chapter 1 . 11/8/2019
cute fic
jessym1988 chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
a great short and cute story
DaybyDay5 chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Great writing captured!
Maddie chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
awh thats adorbs!1
keep writing!
Jaimee chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
This was perfect! Just the right amount of interaction so that the characters seem real! Well done and I'd love to read more!
Sibuna4evs chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
You should really write more of these. You're a great writer! Also, if you could make it a multi-chap that would be awesome! Loved it!
Horses-are-my-life chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Was that being part with the over due water bill really in the show? Sounds familiar
LowBrown chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
THIS IS PERFECT 3
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Wow this sounds like it could actually be a real plot point. Good job!
Animefreak 12 chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, I am fangirling so much that was so cute. Thank you
IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Tee hee. Nice job!
arinhel.melleide chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Just absolutely adorable!
BananaGuts chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
ASGJSDKLGDKJVJGFASDS! THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING EVERRRR! :D :D :D
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
cute, though it seemed improbable that a team of geniuses wouldn't know about how to file taxes. other than that i liked your writing and how you had fluff but tied it into the plot. good work!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
For your first it was great!
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