Reviews for Heartbeat
Rosas-Sampaguita-Luzviminda chapter 1 . 11/24/2018
Nnnnnnn...Precious.
LucidKren chapter 1 . 2/9/2018
This was adorable. I 100 percent accept that this happened.

Happy firsts are wonderful.
hanmir chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
Gosh, i really love this...
I was really looking for the comforting fanfic after the promised day, but most of them are again about the adventure or something like that. So im really glad that i find ur one, about how the Elric brothers after the day. This story is so lovely, comforting and so brotherly. (i just dont know how to say that in other word since eng is not my first language)
Thank you for this great one. I am really grateful that you shared your idea.
Mischief Tea chapter 1 . 9/1/2016
This is so perfect and vivid and beautiful and HUMAN. This really resonates with me - the simple and pure appreciation of someone's living existence is an incredible experience under normal circumstances, but for Ed and Al... yeah.

Thank you for sharing. I feel like this really embodies the peace of resolution that I was looking for at the end of the manga, even though it was implied. And it's just a gorgeous scene.
HappyTheDragon18 chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
Everyone say it with me: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
No but in all seriousness, this was a really marvelous fic! It was nice to see some fluff (but kind of deep fluff since this is a precious topic for the series) between them! It's great that they got Alphonse's body back, and even greater (does that make sense?) that Ed and Al can become even closer over it! Wondeful job! :)
we.can.fly.away.to.Gallifrey chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
These brotherly one shots are so perfect and beautiful. It makes you want to cry...
Artdirector123 chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
Awwwwwww! This was so sweet! I didn't know I wanted a fic like this before I found it, but now I'm really glad you wrote it! It really touched my heart!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
Stop making me cry, man. This is perfect.
themeaningofweird chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
Aww! . Those two are so amazing! And yes, I admit, I'm so obsessed with them…FMA in general, actually…
Them celebrating the tiny moments! . Al should go eat some pie!
luluhrh chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
so cute. . . brotherly love is beautiful. XD
Kaylessa chapter 1 . 1/16/2015
Oh my gosh, sweet. So perfectly sweet. Ed can be a little snot and kind of tsundere at times, but I really love this honest expression between brothers. Really really wonderful.
LifeMeansNothingWithoutMusic chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Beautiful! I really liked it.
rndomfan chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
This was so beautiful. I wish on the manga they would have shown more of these moments (because how could there not be these moments) instead of rushing into the time skip. Ed and Al fought so hard for these moment and to finally have done it, it must have been amazing, like this fanfic. You made me cry tears of joy, so well done.
Puddycat chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Eeee, this is too cute! I'm a huge sucker for brotherly fluff anyway, but the feeling of not quite having caught up after such a huge series of events comes across really well too. I love this story!
Artisiano chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
I love this, truly beautiful :) I have always wondered what they felt like, more specifically, what Al felt like when he finally got his body back, we never found out though, because of the two year time skip right from the end of the Promised Day episode. I absolutely love your depiction of Brotherly fluff :)

Anyway! Try to follow my train of thoughts! Impossible, isn't it? I hope to see a lot more like this from you, you definitely have a lot of potential here :)

And I adore the Elric brothers, and how you wrote them out here, it seems like something they would actually do, I mean, as close as they are :)
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