I loved, loved, loved, this chapter! Good work Martha!

I wonder what the surprise will be, that Professor Sebastian has in store for Akira.

Awesome Chapter I loved it! Keep up the great work! :)

Awesome Chapter! I loved it, keep up the great work! :)

Hi everyone it's me msfox103. I just wanted to let everyone know I'm currently working on ch11 for this story I will get it published asap I'm trying to make the ch a little longer I haven't forgotten about you guys and akira and shadow. Thank you all for reading I haven't updated in a while do to I snapped both my ankles I've been through 2 surgeries and I'm getting ready for my third surgery soon but I will keep writing sorry about my grammer errors some of my ch I would have to rewrite to correct them I will definitely try to correct when I can and dr zagers name in some places just deletes its self I'll try to fix it

oh wow! i loved how shadow broke free of the mind control

Awesome Chapter Martha! I loved it. Keep up the great work. :)

And don't forget guys, you can check out my stories on Archive Of Our Own. :)

I have a good idea for chapter 10 for the middle, what if Akira, Shadow, and Jasmine escape. They go inside of Professor Sebastian's office to see Shadow's parents locked up in a cage together. Akira uses a key to unlock the cage.

But suddenly Akira, Shadow, and Jasmine gets knocked out by tranquilizer darts from Attila, Hun, and Pierce.

What do you think? Message me back soon, and tell me what you think. :)

Loved it, can't wait until the next chapter. :) Keep up the good work. :)

Come back to Fanfiction when you can, :) I hope that you're enjoying your summer.

So Akira has gotten hypnotized and is going to go see Sebastian.

Akira's new Totodile is sweet. I bet that the redhead in the Persian costume was Jessie!

Whoa. I didn't even know that Akira had a fever! Good that it went down, though.

The bookcase leading to a secret passage. Classic! Phew! Akira almost got kidnapped! So Akira got hit with three darts. Wow. ...What does Akira translate to, if anything?

At first, I thought 'Why would Sebastian trust the trio?' I mean I know they changed...somewhat, but they're still very unreliable with their failures even after Giovanni gave them their makeover...until Zager hypnotized them! Although it's strange to know that of all other members of Team Rocket, they chose JJ&M and hypnotized them...What's the purpose I wonder? I guess they were the only ones available so far that Zager was still in contact with so far. Hmmm...

Anyway, good chapter as always although I'm going to have to agree with Mega Meganium, there are some things such as grammar and plot holes that I've spotted looking back so I suggest taking her critique, but still a great chapter overall!

great chapter. it was worth waiting for it :)