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![]() ![]() ![]() You handle the second person POV so well. Gosh, this made me feel for Tony. Not that I don't normally... but. The bit at the end really got to me, particularly the sentence beginning with "On days where you haven't [slept] for nearly a week" (although there is a typo in it). Also "and you deny deny deny like your little heart depends on it, and maybe it does." Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could totally see Tony doing that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your character studies are always so powerful and well-written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the second person pov. Not too many people ever go with it. Think you did it well. Keep up the good work. |