Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
lee chapter 5 . 7/4/2018
oh this is exceptional. great work. can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/20/2017
Sooo cool! Please continue this story! I want to know what's gonna happen!
LarausLorraine chapter 5 . 10/14/2015
Saved your life is what they did.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/12/2015
Great chapter.

Only one little probleme (for me):
I find it difficult to follow the convesation, because it is not always clear which person is speaking.

The rest is great and I can't wait to see in what direction you will lead this story.
shadow of dragoneye chapter 5 . 2/13/2015
Great chapter.

Only a little problem:
I find it sometimes difficult to follow the conversation, because I can't see who is speaking.

But other than that. Great!
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 5 . 2/11/2015
Doubting Asguard, Odin, Farbauti or Loki's biological brothers are prepared for Loki's rage. Frigga is everyones only hope to get Loki in anyway calm enough to listen. I do look forward to Loki embracing all his magical core and exploding Thanos.
PeaceHeather chapter 5 . 2/11/2015
A terrific chapter and I'm glad Loki is awake now. My only complaint is that the dialogue before Loki woke was really hard to follow, since there weren't any tags indicating who was saying what. I'm still not completely sure how much of that conversation was Frigga and how much was Odin, and whether Farbauti or the others were part of it.
PeaceHeather chapter 4 . 2/11/2015
I like Fandral's observations but I appreciate it more when they're able to get down to actual dialogue and movement. Glad to see this updated!
PeaceHeather chapter 3 . 1/12/2015
I love the fics where Loki was never abandoned, but lost.

Odin took the worst possible approach to "protecting" Loki as a kid, and I'm glad Fandral called him on it, however indirectly.

On another note, I'm questioning why Loki would keep quiet at his trial and all I can come up with is another sneaky attempt to protect Asgard from Thanos. If he's dead, Thanos can't find him and won't come to Asgard. Or perhaps he was constrained by Thanos not to reveal anything and when the truth came out at his trial, that caused his collapse in retaliation.

Dunno, but I want to see more of this!
PeaceHeather chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
I love the excellent way you addressed the disparities in Loki's behavior that we saw in The Avengers. His magic was flimsy or nonexistent the whole time, and this is a terrific explanation.
shadow of dragoneye chapter 3 . 1/11/2015
Great Chapter.

Is Thor going to be a problem?
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 3 . 1/8/2015
Yeah Farbauti is alive and a overprotective bear willing to slay anything to protect her cub.
Asa-kuuki chapter 2 . 12/15/2014
Great story! I love it so much, please, write more! Pleeeeeaaaaaase!
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 2 . 12/14/2014
Are Hellbindi and Bylestir the key to Loki's recovery? Is Farbauti still alive and the cure? Can the Casket of Ancient Winters or Jotenheim itself heal Loki? I am so intrigued by this story and await with baited breath what happens next.
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
This chapter was amazing. I look forward to seeing where this storyline goes.
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