Peter was raped by a goddess and ended up dying and giving birth to himself.

I do not know if you will be able to get this but this is a continuation of 'A guy' 's post (Me). After going & rereading the last chapter of 'Measure of a Man,' I realised that the last chapter (No. 19) nails the characterisation, if the rest of the story had that same characterisation/tone/speed/direction, it would have been fine, I just think that the beginning needs to be rewritten, because the ball was definitely dropped after Peter regained his body but you managed to get the last few chapters to the same quality as everything else, I realise I may come off as bossy or to much of a critique but I thouroughly enjoyed this series. Please just finish off 'Measure of a Man' & start work on the last thing in this trilogy, because there isn't enough stories about these two main characters.

I actually like the original version of 'Doomed', but not 'Measure of a Man', my one problem is the whole alchole thing that happens with Peter, & then the fact that he gets really depressed about all of what happened. Also, you never finished 'Measure of a Man', it ends right after the other heroes arrive to help take down the Sinister Six. I enjoyed the moments between Peter & Carol in 'Doomed' because they felt human, you could feel for Peter; who was stressed over Doom & Carol dying, while Carol didn't want him to go too far & kill Doom or get hurt. If there were these moments of just them talking & getting along, 'Measure of a Man' would have been alot more enjoyable but instead it focuses to much on the plot to remember that these characters are HUMAN, they get along but don't always see eye to eye. 'Doomed' balances plot & character very well, by breaking up each of these sequences with others, whereas, 'Measure of a Man' does the same thing, breaking up the segments, you don't feel for Peter, who is depressed over the fact that he killed someone, because it is out of character, instead he should use that fact to push himself to do better, while never forgiving himself. The main problem he should have been confronting is that noone realised it wasn't him, he should have pushed himself away because of that, but not taken to drinking. That was definitly out of character for him.

Yes

Yes please, or make a sequel, one with a little less action & more focus on their day to day life, not one ending with one dying or being kidnapped, although you could have the sequel go back to Doom, or use the Goblin & Mystique. If you do rewrite, add more focus to the everyday things in their life, but don't go to slow.

I don't mine a rewrite

Yes, rewrite, please

I think it would be a good idea for you to rewrite the story.

This isnt good

That silver surfer joke will kill me with laughter for a decade

Thats probably the most sensible way to wake him from a coma spidersense screaming you might die wake dafuq uo in your head does wonders for survival

I got the worse feeling he is gonna lose something super important like his legs or spidersense and yes I consider spider sense as important as his legs actually even more so

Holy ish its the light the true blue light that gonna hurt like hell and probably give him a super nova power boost just for the sake of doing so. Hope Tony got everyone out

Wooof the old rebirth chamber I will be damned

Well than lol tony and his planes