This was one of the best RoryxJess stories I've ever read! Thank you so much for writing this! :)

This is sooooooo good! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Chapter 7
Sorry I'm only reviewing now! I'm sad to see there are only 2 chapters left because you are a GREAT writer and I'm not looking forward to finishing this story. Your characters are believeable and well developed - which I'm sorry to say is a bit hard to find in GG fanfic! I really like how you are sticking to the skeleton of the show and giving us insight into those missing scenes, while diverging from canon and adding your own interpretation. Thank you!

This is really good. Beautiful snippets of a much better season two arc for Rory and Jess than what we actually got when the writers didn't fully use the characters. You write them well, and I really like all of the changes you made. Taylor's home being TP'd would have been fun, though I am sure the TP on his mailbox will likely also annoy him. It is Taylor after all.

This was great! I like seeing Jess and Rory get together at an earlier point of the storyline. I'm hoping more? :)

I love this so much! One of the best I've ever read.

ooooh hooo! I like it!
:) I hope to see more soon.

Really good story! Keep on writing!

I hope for more! The story has been good but you cliff hanged it when it was just getting great!

wow! love it! please let there be more!

TPing Taylor's in broad daylight...Jess must have been really thrown off by Rory.

I adore the image of “tightness in his chest when he sees her, or the flood of fucking poetry that comes to mind when they’re together.” That quiet, visceral intensity is classic Jess. And your pop culture references fall right in line with the tone of the show.

I will say that starting with “There will be no lurking…” I lose track of who’s speaking without dialogue tags. And while I completely agree that Rory would get to a point of frustrated exhaustion in the face of Jess’ charms, I think “She fucking melts” is too harsh, and probably something more appropriate for Jess.

That being said, their kiss in this chapter freaking destroys me. Yes, slow circles. Yes, returning every gesture. Yes to all of it. Looking forward to see where you take the rest of this.

Just when I think there will never be another update, and wow, what an update this was. I'm grinning like an idiot. Your characterisation is just spot on, nothing even slightly wrong with it. I really hope the next chapter is not so far away. Just beautiful :)

Ultra

Hey I've really enjoyed this story so far. Thanks so much for the update!

Nice story, I liked the parental (L/L) interaction at the beginning, but I also liked the change in Rory at the snowman scene. Would like to see more of L/L, especially Lorelai as she discovers the change in Rory.