Congrats on finishing the story. It's a big deal to actually finish one up. The plot held throughout and I think that you improved as it went along. TDC is a hard game for me to write because it is so full of contridictions. Good job and keep writing.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile :( I'm not ignoring you I promise lol. Nice 10th chapter I can really tell improvement in your work! It's a cool twist that Mercya became friends with Bautista's daughter. And yay Castle's in here, I love the secondaries. In my series he's gay though haha. The comment he made about Mercya being cute was pretty funny. It reminded me of the dialogue at the beginning when the guys were talking about Rios' sister. Good work :)

A nice long chapter, good work. I like her plan to get folks afraid of El Diablo. Keep working on the quotation marks you're getting closer.

Good you're starting to work with the quotation marks. It's a start, not quite perfect but congrats on pushing forward.

Nice line here..."Now with the past back where it belongs, in the past, "

It's good to see you still working on the story. keep it going!

Finally found the time to get to chapter and wow I can definitely tell you've grown as a writer and it's only been a few days. Well done. This has turned out to be a rather interesting AU with a pretty cool twist of I say so myself. I liked the OCs you added like Lexi and you added Amp nice! He secondaries in Devils cartel had a lot of potential and were fun, so I'm glad you're using them. What I'll suggest, though Rothalion probably already mentioned it, is that whenever you have dialogue, you need to separate it from your paragraphs and put them in quotation marks. Heres an example, like:

Person 1 smiled when they saw Person 2, and waved to them from across the room.

"Hey, what's up?" person 1 called.

"Nothing much," person 2 replied, heading toward them throught the small crowd. "How's your mom doing?"

"Oh, she's doing a lot better. Thanks for asking," person 1 said, pulling them into a hug.

Hope maybe that helps with your format. It just makes it look cleaner and is loads easier for the reader. Keep it up :)