Reviews for Lucy the King of Heroes
DruidGensokyo chapter 39 . 5/31
For what its worth I do like the premise...initially.

I think your decision to drag practically ALL Heroic Spirits to Fiore as reincarnates is a major mistake. I’m sure a lot of people who read this story just want to read about Lucy being Gilgamesh and affecting Fairy Tail Canon and how different things could be if only she were a mysterious Heroic Spirit incarnate with her own unique brand of Magic.

Shoving other Servants in cheapens the entire experience. Instead of your main character being extraordinary, you made her a one in hundreds. There is no mystery, no surprises...just a “new normal”. Imo its a shame, I could see the great potential this fanfic idea could have.

But you do you, if you want reader feedback, this is mine.
Luckenzio chapter 39 . 4/8
Lucy was more helpful than i expected this chapter. Eager to see the next chapter and the shirou vs archer fight.
pepejohn chapter 1 . 4/3
Needs a beta, or grammarly at the least.
This isn't that good, most of the favs probably came from non-native readers?
DemonShimada chapter 1 . 3/27
idiot beginning of the anime and fire dragon iron fist right away, DUDE THAT COMES ONCE GAJEEL COMES IN at this point natsu is pure fire without mix
Stratos263 chapter 39 . 3/18
Oh man this is getting close for both sides. So the king true identify is Archimedes I am a little shock
Azelios chapter 39 . 3/17
Its getting VERY boring
Now that ALL is a servant incarntion, Lucy is no longer special
Now every one is special, making Lucy, a normal character.

...what are you doing honestly?
Lord of Moons chapter 1 . 3/17
Gilgamesh can't reduce his arrogance. If you reduce infinity by x, you still have infinity. His ego literally let him withstand the Worlds Evils, that said, his younger and older selves were rather less uptight. And either more laid back or wiser. So this isn't completely out there.
StrongGuy159 chapter 39 . 3/17
Cool chapter continue please.
ivanruzic3758 chapter 39 . 3/17
I would ask how could they even invoke a flipping Reality Marble in a world devoid of magical energy, butt this is a fanfic, so everything is the truth, regardless of the facts or sanity.
morgan62400 chapter 38 . 2/29
Hello
When will the next chapter
Lucy the King of Heroes
Guest chapter 38 . 2/25
When are you planning on updating?
webzayne717 chapter 11 . 2/27
Alright, im out Layla was a celestial mage, not a rune mage. This Diabolus Ex Machina retardation did me in, old ideas they may be, it's not worth dealing with this to keep whatever vestiges of the canon are left.
0zymandias chapter 38 . 2/23
is Natsu not a heroic spirit cause if so I am severely disappointed, like so many chances for a cool reveal and nothing.
nishchaysoccer chapter 1 . 2/5
I do hope to enemies mc will be more like gilgamesh and to allies be solfter.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22
You mean laissez faire attitude... get a beta
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