Reviews for The Age Of Bronze And Fire |
---|
Wanheda2003 chapter 12 . 7/11/2019 When the final battle comes I think you should use the machine they are building with Toothless at the start to keep control of the dragons. But after that you should have Jason get hurt. This makes Piper mad and she uses the machine with her charmspeak. Either have her yell stop, which causes all the invaders to stop fighting. Or make her so angry she yells die at someone. This goes through the machine and causes the invaders to collapse. All the Berkians have wax in their ears and don't hear it, except Hiccup, whose wax fell out during the fight. He falls off Toothless and smashes through some crates (or something) and lands on the ground. After the invaders are captured Astrid finds him. And you can go from there. Use this idea if you want. |
Okurdek chapter 12 . 3/9/2019 Why did you stop here? Maybe you could involve the Oracle through dreams giving them a prophecy that makes it look like Toothless won't survive but means something entirely different, like one of the dragon riders having to join the Seven. |
Furys venom chapter 10 . 2/28/2019 This may be the funniest chapter in this fanfic. |
Furys venom chapter 9 . 2/28/2019 Gorthi? I’m pretty sure it’s Gothi |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/26/2018 yeah you should totally show annabeth's cousin at the end maybe add some child of thor |
Jacqui chapter 12 . 6/26/2018 I love this story! You are an amazing writer! I don't know how to finish the story, although you could draw inspiration from the HTTYD 3 trailer. Also, it might me nice (and sad) if you had Gaia give Percy a flashback of Tartarus, and Hiccup having to help him (solidifying their friendship, status as leaders, and helping them understand themselves). Or you could somehow involve Magnus Chase (cuz Norse). |
HoneyxMonkey chapter 1 . 5/23/2017 Real quick question, would T, be able too control Frank when he is in dragon form? |
LemonPJOFan chapter 1 . 5/10/2017 Me likey. I love Percy Jackson, I kind of don't like HTTYD, so this is AWESOME! And I'm just reading the first chapter! |
SCUBAeagle96 chapter 12 . 4/21/2017 Hey Sil it's your old follower that went insane when he first saw this story if you want to message me sometime and I could help you brainstorm for this story if you want to. |
RangerOfOlympus chapter 12 . 3/4/2017 Grrrr! Edilions get everywhere. |
Cold Scarlet Flame chapter 12 . 2/23/2017 keep up the good work man 9/10 the only reason it was a 9 was cause you got some names wrong |
1st Dragon King chapter 5 . 2/5/2017 dude no one minds a long chapter trust me i just got done reading a story with chapters twice or three times the length of yours with like ten times the chapters |
The Wizard Rider chapter 8 . 12/29/2016 MAKE A WAR WITH DRAGO! Make the demigods use their powers! |
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 12 . 12/29/2016 You really should just get Percy to summon a tsunami that could destroy the Berserker's Island. |
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 10 . 12/29/2016 Hiccup should not know any Spanish. |