Reviews for Building on top of the ashes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story so far. Do you plan to add more to it? It's good to see them happy after all they went through in the movie. It never really sat well with me, that Milo would give up so easily at the end. It seemed untrue to his character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet I hope you continue this sometime |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it, update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE how they are so passionate and yet oh so shy with one another! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Milo is such a sweety! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fantastically well written story you wrote the characters with incredibly skilled depth really excellent work Please think about adding more to this I'd love to read and review more |
![]() ![]() I like your story...I hope you update it soon :) |
![]() ![]() Oh god please update soon! I love this story and I feel like I'm the only one whos a fan of this fandom haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting plot so far and surprisingly the different time setting works. I like how youre developing the characters and their intereactions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore your writing! The movie had such potential, but the characters lacked development and that's exactly what you're doing, while nailing their personalities along the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A story where they live? Brilliant! Love it so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was happy to see fanfiction about this movie cause I love the movie and even though I knew everyone died I was hoping they would escape...so your story is appreciated and I cant wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this so far and I hope you continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very good. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() Great work! Please continue, I would be very interested in how it goes on with them! |