Reviews for Building on top of the ashes
AmandaH109 chapter 7 . 11/3/2019
Very good story so far. Do you plan to add more to it? It's good to see them happy after all they went through in the movie. It never really sat well with me, that Milo would give up so easily at the end. It seemed untrue to his character.
Anime Princess chapter 7 . 5/18/2019
So sweet
I hope you continue this sometime
M.Lillith chapter 7 . 11/29/2017
I love it, update please!
Anime Princess chapter 7 . 6/6/2017
I LOVE how they are so passionate and yet oh so shy with one another!
Anime Princess chapter 4 . 6/6/2017
Milo is such a sweety!
Marie King chapter 7 . 9/13/2016
This is a fantastically well written story you wrote the characters with incredibly skilled depth really excellent work Please think about adding more to this I'd love to read and review more
Jeanette chapter 7 . 5/19/2015
I like your story...I hope you update it soon :)
Anon chapter 7 . 2/2/2015
Oh god please update soon! I love this story and I feel like I'm the only one whos a fan of this fandom haha.
claire-loves-music chapter 7 . 1/9/2015
Interesting plot so far and surprisingly the different time setting works. I like how youre developing the characters and their intereactions.
Bree-RandomWriter chapter 7 . 1/7/2015
I adore your writing! The movie had such potential, but the characters lacked development and that's exactly what you're doing, while nailing their personalities along the way.
NyxEos chapter 7 . 11/22/2014
A story where they live? Brilliant! Love it so far
darkshadowarchfiend chapter 4 . 11/9/2014
I was happy to see fanfiction about this movie cause I love the movie and even though I knew everyone died I was hoping they would escape...so your story is appreciated and I cant wait for the next chapter.
Lady-Isowen chapter 4 . 11/8/2014
I'm enjoying this so far and I hope you continue!
phoward chapter 3 . 11/7/2014
This is very good. Please continue.
Kate chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Great work! Please continue, I would be very interested in how it goes on with them!