Reviews for Deny Everything And Run |
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Jasper's Waifu chapter 9 . 7/6/2015 Love it |
ShadowLDrago chapter 9 . 4/29/2015 Before theY could even speak, not their. |
creatorX33 chapter 9 . 4/29/2015 That was amusing. |
ShadowLDrago chapter 8 . 4/22/2015 You tease us purpledragon. |
ShadowLDrago chapter 7 . 3/30/2015 Intact not in tact. This was a lot of fun, there will be a next chapter to this I'm guessing due to this not being marked Complete, right? |
ShadowLDrago chapter 6 . 3/30/2015 Nice chapter, though in one moment, you misspelled La Muerte as La Muerete. |
ShadowLDrago chapter 5 . 3/30/2015 You know something? I WOULD question HOW a being made of tar and a being made of candy, one looking like a skeleton and the other looking like some sort of humanoid abomination could have a baby, much less twins, but then I remember: God logic. When it comes to deities in all fiction, question how some things are even possible is generally a bad idea. Also, as for if Nita and the Death twins will be friends, maybe once Nita's time comes and she passes away. Easy to forget that as nice as La Muerte is, she is still the ruler of the Dead, granted, the Remembered Dead who are good because according to the guy who made Book of Life, there is a Land Of The Cursed which is essentially Hell. |
ShadowLDrago chapter 4 . 3/29/2015 Reveal, not revile. Therefore, not there fore. I wonder what scared Candle Maker so much? |
ShadowLDrago chapter 3 . 3/29/2015 HAH! Ella Vive cracked me up with her lingerie joke, seriously, comedy gold! |
sashei 3 chapter 7 . 2/20/2015 hehehehe love this chapter |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/12/2015 Can you draw the part when Xibalba and Manolo are freaking out because their children might date each other please? |
RoseBud chapter 7 . 2/11/2015 Im guessing they're trying to find out who Joaquin will end up with. Let's see how that turns out! I liked the part where Manolo and Xibalba were stressing about how their future children would turn out. Maybe you could draw something similar to that? Okay, I'm done now. -RoseBud |
creatorX33 chapter 6 . 2/9/2015 So sweet! |
ec chapter 6 . 2/6/2015 so when will the twins be born |
Domination of the World chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 First, let me just say the title of your story had me bursting into tears the moment I read it. Xibalba better shape up before the kids get here! Quick question: Are they identical twin boys or fraternal twins, one boy and one girl? In chapter five Candle Maker said one of each, while the names suggest boys. I googled "Roberto" and noticed it can be used as a girl's name. "Robby/Robbie" would be an adorable nickname, considering its similarity to "Balby." I really want to see Robbie be Xibalba's little princess and mischief maker. Something about that dynamic would just make me gush with cuteness! |