i know u were just trying to make a point but by all accounts before his clan got genocided sasuke was the opposite of arrogant lol he was a happy go lucky kid. pretty sure it was the ptsd and survivors guilt that turned him into what he was

wow. This is literally one of my fav fics of all time. Cant wait for the sequel to come out :D

atomic level might be a bit too much...but still great story and chapter owo

People seem to forget that the moment that a story has a fanfic, the plot in that story is decimated.
In a fanfic you can just say that Naruto was the bad guy and Madara wanted to save the world from the sharingan wielding Naruto by using the Juubi to stop Naruto from using...
Infinite "Amaterasu" and prove himself so he can become the leader of Kusagakure.

And you can't call bullshit on that since it's a fanfic, not the fucking plot being rewritten exactly as it was in the anime, in a website for people to read!

As I was saying before fanfiction rudely cut me off, you can easily disregard Jaune by a random reason. Like Ozpin deciding to not trust those obviously fake transcripts or something like that.

Also, he is practically irrelevant to the story and a considerable amount of people dislike him, I myself dislike him because I believe his personality is...
Annoying.

Jaune is quite easy to just remove since you c

MAKE MORE

pls

I remember reading a good ways through this story a while back, before I had gotten used to higher quality content than the majority of FFnet. Coming back to this story, I'm glad to see it is still up to my standards, the grammar is well structured and the story doesn't feel too contrived that it puts me off. So far this story is really interesting, and I shall continue forth to see how it develops in later chapters.

Cinder beating Naruto...
Yeesh

Hey there Moth, I have a question for ya have you read the Naruto/RWBY/Halo crossover? If you haven't I would suggest it, because I honestly think it's awesome, and it kinda shows that Halo crossovers with Naruto, or something of the like are awesome, I wish it had more chapters in it, because I would love to see it's progression because it's honestly an uncommon type of story, and between this story, a few bleach/Naruto xovers, one piece/naruto xovers, and mass effect and naruto xovers its easily in my favorites of stories.

Honestly I would equate this story to I can't recall it's name, but the Naruto, Bleach xover that has Naruto turn into a hollow, after getting betray, and left to turn into a hollow because of kurama, and he turns into a fox hollow, then eventually becomes a lorde, and makes his own empire etc, and takes his revenge on a future Konaha, and shinigamis etc.

Ya know, I am honestly curious, do you think because of needing boruto to be the main character in boruto that naruto was just kinda grown in power a little bit, then just stunted growth wise? Because honestly even though he also had sage mode, paths etc modes, I feel like just base strength naruto would be alot stronger even in naruto the last, and the like than what he was portrayed, and personally while I know he isn't the pure brute force number one, I would still have to say not including kuramas Chakra, he HAS to have some of the highest amounts of Chakra in his universe.

Also i would think that if Naruto was allowed the main character running as long as Goku has been given, he would be under him, and Gohan, but stronger than Vegeta. In my opinion atleast, also I see Naruto as being able to reach "god" like power in his base form, because honestly Karamazov keeps gaining strength, and his chakra drips into naruto's basically and the longer the partnership, honestly the more potent, and stronger naruto gets.

So with that being said, I don't think that Naruto has a upper limit other than just his life span, and being killed basically. I honestly think in Canon Naruto is easily in boruto stronger than prime strength Hagoromo, prime strength Kaguya. Or atleast a tie at a minimum. Now could he take on Hago, Haru, and Kaguya? Maybe but he would be very very hard pressed, and he would probably have to have help from Sasuke.

After all the changes made away from canon, I was actually hoping to transmigrate Ozpin into Naruto.
Surely you had watched the episodes of Vol. 5 by this time right?
Wouldn't that been owesome?
Naruto, Ozpin and Kurama in a single body.

So do you think Canon prime naruto without hagoramos boosts is stronger than prime hagoramo? Or do you think that they would be hard pressed against each other? Or how do you think prime naruto stacks up against anyone else in canon? Do you think base prime naruto can be as strong as Hashiram, and Madara? Or as strong or close to base level hagorama, or Kaguya?

I really likedon't reading this first chapter, but while I did like reading it there is some problems I have with it. Both Yang and Ruby literally" rolling on the floor laughing" I don't think they'll do that, while I think they'll find it funny it's not lose your breath funny. It would have been better if it was just them holding in there snickers it would've been more embarrassing for Weiss. It made Yang look kinda dumb and childish laughing on the floor over a little joke. While I liked reading the first chapter I hope you don't continue to compare RWBY characters to Naruto friends. While some do have the same characteristics they're completely different people. While I get that it helps him cope it won't help him move on if he just keeps comparing everybody to his old friends. Another problem I have is Karamas Oc like behavior, he's a over a thousand years old biju completely different from humans, he wouldn't like being manhandled into a pair of breast by a human he doesn't know and being perverted. All in all good first chapter. It could've been better with some tweaking I'll read the next chapters to see where you'll take it.

Finally no loner Nerfuto