Well written. I hope to see an update soon, on either here or AO3. Please release some sort of notification as to when you update on AO3.

It is rough to survive in the winter! It seems to take forever to get back to Falkreach. But no pressure on finishing your chapters about Falkreach. Something has to be done about the Cruel Jarl and has to be replaced soon enough more fit to rule the land.

I’m enjoying your story a lot, but recently today as I was playing Skyrim and apart from making my house filled with cool shit, I first steward and very first Housecarl Lydia has died when I got gotten the great sword Dawnbreaker! She went down fighting as a warrior. I have the feeling of how I feel when a companion of mine falls dead, guilt. Maybe that was how Lydia was to die in the first place. I don’t wish to know if Lydia does in your story yet. Good luck on what you’ve accomplished this far and I read on in later days for Skyrim!

That was quite a rough struggle with the spider and those zombie things. I know what they’re called, but I can’t just spell the name yet.

I have not forgotten about the trolls in Skyrim, I hate trolls I can’t kill so easily, like the Snow White haired trolls! Those had proven to be a bitch from what I do remember.

That was pretty violent of Lydia to slide and cut in between the bandit’s nuts! I enjoyed this chapter so much that Lydia is alive and has become a tough fighter than ever!

That was very impressive taking out the bandits! I just hope Lydia and the Dragonborn get reunited again soon.

You did a great job With this chapter having Lydia defend herself better than she had in the beginning! I say she’s learned to be strong and brave after all!

I went to Falkreach and helped clear the bandits in the mines and there was no land for sell but as I explained earlier I did get right on to building my own house, it’ll be a big place by the time I’m fine with how I made it and can just settle down after the hard work I must perform.

I see your point in your notes about the Dragonborn being judged by what he does whenever someone from different sides demand, ask, or force him to do their dirty work for them no matter what. I’ll try to make this review as short as Ican this time. If your story isn’t finished, my advice is plan for a good finale with the world eater slain and defeated if that’s how this epic tale should end.

I know I might have said before that joining the band of Companions was the next thing I wanted to consider doing right away. I thought making myself a hero of vast legend in many places would be worthy of being a member of the companions despite I’d become a werewolf which I knew already. But like most war bands of warriors the companions also had an enemies, the Silver Hand, a large group of bandits who gather and hate werewolves so they try to kill the companions! All of them! I know what I’d be getting myself into. So I’m saying no thanks for a while and will continue helping people throughout Skyrim!

Hi! I’m back reading the rest of your story on Skyrim! Sorry if I was gone for a while. Playing Assassin’s Creed Odyssey kind of took me away for as long as I could stand it till I couldn’t stand no more. Any I’m back to playing Skyrim again and I also started building most of my own house close to Falkreach, Lakeview Manor it’s called. I just got to earn more money to help me build myself some new stuff that way the manor won’t look so empty. I need to collect a bounty or more. Long live the Dragonborn. Oh by the way look up this really cool song Dragonborn by NerdOut! It’s so epic!

It looks like the Blades are going to start up their former business once again as they did before in the Great War. I’be done some of my homework looking up the history in Skyrim and I’m still standing since the day I began fighting for people, not just myself.

The color of the nymphs’s eyes make me think of them as beautiful creatures, the way you have them as makes me what to have a nymph as a pet and house mate based on their eye colors! By the way that New housecarl is a real piece of work, even if she’s beautiful and s bit stubborn.

I’m glad the nymphs are being protected and cared for after what they’ve been through! I wonder what is going to happen to them now under Arn’s wing!